Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences. For example, mention how often, where, or what you enjoy about it.

예시: Yes. I enjoy playing badminton in my free time, and I usually play at the local sports center on weekends. I often meet three or four friends there, and we play doubles for about two hours because it helps me stay fit and socialise.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, then explain briefly why you played that hobby using clear linking words. Correct grammar (tense and articles) and be specific about location or frequency.

예시: Yes. When I was a child I loved playing badminton because there was a park near my house with a small court. As a result, my friends and I would meet there every afternoon after school to practise.

제안: Answer directly and avoid hesitation phrases. If you did not keep the hobby, state that clearly and explain why with a linking word. Use correct grammar and be concise (max 3–4 sentences).

예시: No, I haven't kept the same hobby. Although my mother used to ask me to play basketball when I was young, I didn't enjoy it, so I stopped playing and switched to badminton instead.

제안: Respond with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific detail using linking words (e.g. "because", "so"). Avoid awkward verb forms and repetition; keep sentences natural and concise.

예시: Yes. My family and I usually play badminton together at the secondary school hall on weekends, because it is spacious and cheap to rent. We often play doubles for about two hours, which is a good way to bond and exercise.

× Yes, my hobby is playing badminton.

✓ Yes, my hobby is playing badminton.

No change needed; 'hobby' singular matches 'is'. Keep as is.

× I usually play badminton during weekends.

✓ I usually play badminton on weekends.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'weekends' to indicate habitual action. 'During weekends' is not idiomatic in this context.

× I will gather with my friend to play together.

✓ I usually meet my friends to play.

The original uses future 'will' and 'gather with' awkwardly. For a usual habit, use present tense 'usually meet'. Use plural 'friends' if more than one; if only one friend, say 'my friend'. 'Meet' is a more natural verb than 'gather with'.

× My hobby when I was a child, also playing badminton because near my house there's a guard, there's a park and we can play badminton at there.

✓ When I was a child, my hobby was also playing badminton because there was a park near my house where we could play.

Multiple issues: sentence structure and tense. Use past tense 'was' for a past hobby. 'There's a guard' is unclear and probably incorrect; removed. Use 'there was a park near my house' (past). Use 'where we could play' instead of 'at there' which is incorrect prepositional use.

× I think that will be my, I think that will be playing basketball because my mum call me to play with the basketball but I don't like to play.

✓ I think that was playing basketball because my mum used to call me to play, but I didn't like it.

The sentence mixes future 'will be' with past context. Use past simple 'was' or 'used to' to indicate habitual past actions. 'Mum call' should be 'mum used to call' or 'mum would call' and 'play with the basketball' is unnatural; use 'play basketball'. Change 'I don't like' to past 'I didn't like' to match time frame.

× Yes, usually are playing badminton in the weekend.

✓ Yes, we usually play badminton on the weekend.

Missing subject 'we' and incorrect verb form 'are playing' for habitual action; use simple present 'play'. Use 'on the weekend' or 'on weekends' for habitual actions.

× We will play badminton at a badminton court in a secondary school hall.

✓ We play badminton at the badminton court in the secondary school hall.

Use simple present 'play' for habitual action instead of future 'will play'. Use definite article 'the' if referring to a specific court/hall. 'In a secondary school hall' is acceptable but 'the secondary school hall' is clearer if specific.