Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然、语法更准确，句子不要过长或重复。先直接回答（topic sentence），然后用一到两句提供具体细节或例子。注意动词时态和单复数，避免拼写错误并用连接词使句子连贯。例如把“I like drawing picture”改为“I like drawing pictures in my spare time”，并解释为什么喜欢或举例说明朋友请求你画画的情况。

예시: I enjoy drawing pictures in my spare time because it helps me relax and unwind. For example, last week I spent an afternoon painting a landscape, and several friends asked me to draw portraits for them, which I found very rewarding.

제안: 回答要连贯并注意时态一致（谈过去的事情用过去时），避免重复表达同一意思。先用一句过去时的总体陈述，然后提供具体的地点或感受作为细节，使用连接词如“because”或“so”。例如将“I love running”改为“I loved running”并说明在村庄跑步的具体原因或记忆。

예시: When I was a child, I loved running around the village where my grandparents lived. I enjoyed it because the paths were quiet and I felt free and excited whenever I raced my friends.

제안: 回答应直接说自己从小就有某个爱好，并用更清晰的词汇描述活动。避免生造词或拼写错误（例如“stretch people”应为“sketch people”），使用连词连贯细节并控制句子数量。说明常用的工具和原因会更具体。

예시: Yes, I have drawn since childhood. I often sketched people and signs using pencils and bright watercolors because I enjoy experimenting with colors and capturing facial expressions.

제안: 回答要注意主谓一致和时态，并把信息组织成一两句。先回答是否有相同爱好，再补充具体细节（家庭成员的职业或特长）。避免无关或不连贯的句子。

예시: Yes, my father shares the same hobby — he also likes drawing. He is a designer who used to work for a sand sculpture company, so he can also create detailed sand sculptures.

× Yeah, I like drawing picture in my spare time.

✓ Yeah, I like drawing pictures in my spare time.

原句中“drawing picture”中的“picture”应为可数名词复数“pictures”，因为表示一般爱好时用泛指的复数形式或不定式名词短语。建议在类似场景用复数或使用不定式/动名词结构："drawing pictures"或"drawing"。

× When I drawing picture I feel relaxed and the peace war it give me a lot of fun and the many of my friends ask me to draw a picture of.

✓ When I'm drawing pictures I feel relaxed, and the peace it gives me is a lot of fun, and many of my friends ask me to draw pictures for them.

句子有多个问题： 1) “When I drawing”中缺少be动词，应为现在进行时“When I'm drawing”。 2) “picture”应为复数。 3) “the peace war it give me a lot of fun”语序和用词错误，应为“the peace it gives me”并且“gives”需与主语一致（第三人称单数），此处属第三人称单数问题。 4) “the many of my friends ask me to draw a picture of”结构错误，应为“many of my friends ask me to draw pictures for them”。 建议：按从属连词引导的时间状语从句用进行时；主句中注意主谓一致；用“for them”或直接省略宾语替换模糊表达。

× Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?

✓ (No correction needed)

该问句为考官原句，无需修改。若标注学生回答关联时需注意时态一致。

× Yeah, when I was a child. I love running.

✓ When I was a child, I loved running.

原句时态混用：前半句“was”是过去时，后句“I love running”应与过去时一致用过去时“loved”，表示过去的习惯性动作。建议保持时态一致：过去时间状语对应过去时。

× I love running in the village where my parent grandparents lived.

✓ I loved running in the village where my parents and grandparents lived.

问题： 1) “parent grandparents”缺少复数与连词，应写成“parents and grandparents”。 2) 时态应与陈述保持一致，故把“I love”改为“I loved”。 建议：注意复数形式和并列关系，用正确的连词连接家庭成员。

× Every time I run, I will feel exciting, excited.

✓ Every time I ran, I felt excited.

错误： 1) “exciting”是现在分词，表示使人兴奋的事物；“excited”表示人的感受。此处应使用“excited”。 2) 时态与上文过去时一致，用一般过去时“ran/felt”。 建议：区分形容词“excited”和“exciting”，并保持时态一致。

× Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

✓ (No correction needed)

该为考官原句，无需修改。句子语法正确，使用现在完成时表示从过去持续到现在的情况。

× I loved drawing things.

✓ I loved drawing things.

句子本身可以接受，但在上下文中如需更自然可改为“I loved drawing”或“I liked drawing things”。此处不作强制改动。

× I was a child. I often stretch people and the signs, use pencils and bright watercolors because I enjoy experimenting with colors and the capturing expressions. Join.

✓ When I was a child, I often drew people and scenes, using pencils and bright watercolors because I enjoyed experimenting with colors and capturing expressions.

原句问题较多： 1) “I was a child.”与后句衔接生硬，应合并为时间状语从句。 2) “stretch people and the signs”不符合表达，应该是“drew people and scenes”（画人物和场景）。 3) 动词形式混乱，应使用过去时“drew”、“enjoyed”。 4) “using pencils and bright watercolors”应作为方式状语，使用动词-ing形式。 5) “the capturing expressions. Join.”多余且语义不通，应为“capturing expressions”。 建议：理清想表达的对象（people, scenes）、保持时态一致、用合适的动词和非谓语结构来表达方式。

× My father share the same hobby with me.

✓ My father shares the same hobby as me.

问题： 1) 主谓不一致：“father”是第三人称单数，应使用“shares”。 2) 习惯表达是“share the same hobby with”也可，但更自然是“shares the same hobby as me”或“shares my hobby”。 建议：注意主谓一致并使用更自然的搭配。

× He likes drawing too. He's a designer, he worked for a sand sculpture company and he also know how to make sand sculpture.

✓ He likes drawing too. He's a designer; he worked for a sand-sculpture company and he also knows how to make sand sculptures.

问题： 1) “he worked”如果指过去的工作经历可以保留过去时，但前句“He's a designer”为现在时，需确保时态一致或明确时间。如果他现在仍是设计师，建议改为“he works for”。 2) “he also know”主谓不一致，应为“knows”。 3) “sand sculpture”作为公司或技能可用复数“sand sculptures”。 建议：根据实际意思选择时态（现在从事则用“works”），并注意第三人称单数动词形式。