Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you have any hobbies?
수험생
Yes I do. I enjoy reading news because it's relaxing and it helps me learn new words and I can forget about stress for a while. For example, I usually read for about an hour before bed and sometimes I finish one book in a week.
시험관
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, when I was a child I used to play football a lot. I enjoyed it because it was fun and I could play with my friends and we made every weekend to practice.
시험관
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
수험생
Yes, I have liked drawing since I was a child. I started when I was around 7:00 because my parents gave me some colored pencils and I enjoyed making pictures, for example. I still draw simple, uh, things on weekends and I do it almost every week.
시험관
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
수험생
Well, actually I don't have exactly the same hobbies as my family, but we share some interests. For example, my parents and I like watching films together because it's very relaxing and we do that on weekends. But I also enjoy playing basketball with friends, which they don't do.
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총점
Part 1
Do you have any hobbies?
점수: 82.0제안: 回答总体自然且信息充足，但可改进句子连贯性与词汇多样性。注意避免句子过长或重复（例如重复表达“relaxing”），并在必要时使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。此外，可用更具体细节（如喜欢哪类新闻或举例具体书名）增加说服力。
예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading news because it helps me relax and expands my vocabulary. For example, I usually read technology and world news for about an hour before bed, and on weekends I sometimes finish a non-fiction book in a week.
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答直接但有语法和表达不准确的问题（例如“we made every weekend to practice”不通顺）。建议用更自然的过去习惯表达并补充具体细节（如队名、位置、练习频率）以增强内容。
예시: Yes, I used to play football a lot as a child. I played as a midfielder for a local youth team and we practised every weekend, which was great fun because I could play with my friends and improve my skills.
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
점수: 74.0제안: 内容清楚但有些口语填充词（如“uh”）和细节不准确（例如写成“7:00”应为年龄）。建议用更标准的表达说明开始年龄、风格或题材，并减少填充词；可举例说明最近画过的内容或使用的材料。
예시: Yes, I've enjoyed drawing since I was about seven, when my parents gave me a set of coloured pencils. I usually draw simple landscapes and cartoons on weekends, and last month I completed a small watercolor of a park.
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
점수: 84.0제안: 回答清晰且自然，但可通过更多细节和连接词增强连贯性。可说明喜欢哪类电影、一个具体的观影经历，或解释为什么喜欢篮球以展示比较与个人观点。
예시: Not exactly. My parents and I enjoy watching films together—mostly dramas and documentaries—and we usually have a movie night every Saturday. Personally, I also enjoy playing basketball with friends because it keeps me active and is a good way to socialise.
문법
× We made every weekend to practice.
✓ We used to meet every weekend to practice.
原句中語序與動詞搭配不正確，使用 "made every weekend to practice" 非慣用表達，應使用 "used to meet every weekend to practice" 或 "we met every weekend to practice"。建議：描述過去經常發生的行為時可用 "used to + 動詞" 或簡單過去時（we met）。
× I still draw simple, uh, things on weekends and I do it almost every week.
✓ I still draw simple things on weekends and I do it almost every week.
此處原句中有口語填充詞 "uh"，在書面或正式回答中應刪除以保持句子流暢。雖然不是嚴格的語法錯誤，但根據題表只修正列出的語法類型，此處視為動名詞/現在習慣表達保持原形即可，刪去干擾詞更清晰。
× I have liked drawing since I was a child.
✓ I have liked drawing since I was a child. → I have liked drawing since I was a child.
雖然句子語法上可接受，但更常見且更自然的表達是使用現在完成簡單時態（have liked）或現在完成進行（have been liking 不自然），因此原句可保留。此處未作實質更改。
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