Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子不够自然且有语法错误，信息组织混乱。应直接回答并用一到两句具体细节支持，注意时态和词汇选择，用连词衔接。比如说明何时开始、频率和成果。

예시: Yes, I have a hobby: weight training. I started going to the gym regularly when I was an undergraduate in 2017, and in my first three years I gained about 5 kilograms of muscle. I usually train four times a week to maintain my strength.

제안: 回答语法和词汇错误较多，句子不连贯。应先直接回答问题，然后用一至两句具体细节说明活动和频率，避免不相关或错误的词语。

예시: Yes, when I was a child I loved running and playing basketball. After school I would rush to the school playground and play with my friends for an hour or two every day.

제안: 回答不够清楚且含有重复词（gym gym）和语法问题。应先明确是否持续有童年爱好，再对比现在的爱好，使用连词使结构流畅，提供频率细节。

예시: Not really; I don't have a hobby that has continued unbroken since childhood. I was keen on basketball as a child, but now weight training is my main hobby and I go to the gym almost every morning.

제안: 总体表达清楚但有小语法和用词问题（如“runs on a playground”）。可以用更自然的表达并给出一两个具体比较细节，使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, my family all enjoy physical activity, although we prefer different things. For example, I focus on weight training, my mother likes going for runs around the local track, and my father prefers taking walks in the park on weekends.

× I study going to the gym when I was an undergraduate in 2017.

✓ I started going to the gym when I was an undergraduate in 2017.

原句使用了现在时“study”，但句子说明的是过去发生的动作（2017年在本科时开始），时态不一致。应使用过去时“started”来表达“开始做某事”。建议：描述过去事件时使用过去时（例如：started, began, went）。

× In the first three-year, my weight increased 5 kilograms each year.

✓ In the first three years, my weight increased by 5 kilograms each year.

“the first three-year”结构不正确，应为复数“three years”。另外，表示每年增加多少用短语“increased by 5 kilograms each year”。建议：注意复数名词和固定搭配“increased by ...”。

× I spend my childhood on running on the sports fields, playing basketball.

✓ I spent my childhood running on the sports fields and playing basketball.

“spend ... on doing”在这里不合适，且时态应为过去“spent”。“running on the sports fields, playing basketball”用并列结构并用“and”连接更自然。建议：过去描述用“spent my childhood doing something”；并列动作用“and”。

× As soon as the class was over, I rushed to the hospital court.

✓ As soon as class was over, I rushed to the school court.

原句中的“hospital court”不合逻辑，很可能是“school court”（学校球场）。另外，习惯表达中常省略“the”前的class。建议：使用合适的名词表示地点，并注意固定搭配。

× I really pretty kid on it.

✓ I was really a pretty kid at that time.

原句缺少系动词，应为“I was”。“on it”用法不当，描述过去状态可用“at that time”。同时需要不定冠词“a pretty kid”。建议：描述过去状态使用“was/were”，并注意副词位置和介词搭配。

× None of them. When I was a kid I pretty keen on playing basketball but now pumping iron become my biggest hobby.

✓ None of them. When I was a kid I was pretty keen on playing basketball, but now pumping iron has become my biggest hobby.

句中多处错误：缺少过去时be动词“was”；连接词前需逗号；“become”应为现在完成或现在时的完成式“has become”以表示已转变为现在的爱好；“pumping iron”保持不变。建议：注意主系表结构、时态一致性以及连接词使用。

× I usually go to the gym gym every morning.

✓ I usually go to the gym every morning.

原句重复了“gym”。删除重复词即可。建议：写句子时检查重复词汇。

× My whole family like physical exercise, but there are some differences between us.

✓ My whole family likes physical exercise, but there are some differences between us.

“family”作为一个整体通常视为单数，谓语动词应为“likes”。建议：集体名词作单一整体时用单数动词；若强调成员个体可用复数表达（e.g. My family members like...）。

× My mom usually runs on a playground but my dad just walks in the park.

✓ My mom usually runs at a playground, but my dad just walks in the park.

run通常搭配介词“at”或“on”取决习惯，但“runs on a playground”可以改为更自然的“runs at a playground”或“runs on the playground”；两部分句子之间需加逗号。建议：根据语境选择合适介词，并注意标点。