Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes. My favorite hobby is playing cricket. When I have free time, I usually play cricket with my friends at the local ground because it helps me relax and stay fit.

제안: Answer directly and use past tense when talking about childhood. Avoid repeating phrases and use a linking word to compare past and present. Provide a specific memory or detail to enrich the answer.

예시: Yes. I loved playing cricket as a child, and I still enjoy it now. For example, when I was eight I used to play every afternoon with neighborhood friends, which helped me improve my batting skills.

제안: Be grammatically accurate and concise. Use past perfect or simple past for childhood and explain current limitation clearly with linking words like 'but' or 'however'. Avoid filler words and correct awkward phrases such as 'I don't enough much time'.

예시: Yes. I have played cricket since childhood, but recently I have less time to play because of my acting schedule. However, I try to practice on weekends to keep my skills sharp.

제안: Give a clear direct response and use correct possessive forms. Use linking words to organize comparisons and avoid repetition. Mention specifics briefly about each family member to make the answer more informative.

예시: No, my hobbies differ from my family's. For instance, my father enjoys volleyball, my brother likes football, and I prefer cricket, so we each follow different sports.

× Among them, one of my favorite hobby is playing cricket.

✓ Among them, one of my favorite hobbies is playing cricket.

The noun 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because it follows 'one of my', which requires a plural noun (one of my hobbies). Use 'hobbies' to match the determiner phrase and ensure correct singular/plural agreement.

× If I get a free time, that time I prefer to playing cricket with my friends.

✓ If I get free time, I prefer playing cricket with my friends.

Do not use the article 'a' with the uncountable noun 'free time' and after 'prefer' use the gerund form without 'to' (prefer + -ing). Also simplify the sentence order for natural English.

× That is same for as my childhood.

✓ That was the same in my childhood.

The reference is to the past, so use past tense 'was'. Use the definite article 'the' with 'same' and the preposition 'in' with 'childhood'. The original used incorrect preposition and tense.

× When I was a child I love to play cricket and nowadays it is the same for me.

✓ When I was a child I loved to play cricket, and nowadays it is the same for me.

The clause referring to childhood should be in past tense ('loved') to match 'When I was a child'. Keep 'nowadays' with present tense. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity.

× Yes, I have a same hobby so when I was a child that I'm allowed to play cricket and nowadays I love to play cricket with my friends but uh I am stuck in my acting schedule that's why I don't enough much time to play cricket.

✓ Yes, I have had the same hobby since I was a child; I was allowed to play cricket then, and nowadays I love playing cricket with my friends, but I am stuck in my acting schedule, so I don't have enough time to play cricket.

Multiple issues: use present perfect 'have had' to show continuity, 'the same hobby' not 'a same hobby', use 'since' to indicate from childhood, correct verb forms ('was allowed'), prefer gerund 'playing', and correct phrase 'don't have enough time'. Sentence is broken into clauses and punctuation added for clarity.

× No, I don't have a same hobbies with my family members.

✓ No, I don't have the same hobbies as my family members.

Use 'the same' not 'a same', and 'hobbies' should agree with plural 'family members'. Also use 'as' rather than 'with' in this comparison structure.

× So my father's uh interested in playing volleyball, but uh, I am interested in playing uh cricket.

✓ So my father is interested in playing volleyball, but I am interested in playing cricket.

The possessive 'father's' requires a verb: 'my father is'. Remove filler 'uh' and extra commas. Maintain parallel structure 'interested in playing' for both subjects.

× My and my brother's interested in playing football.

✓ My brother and I are interested in playing football.

Use correct subject order and pronoun case: 'My brother and I' as the compound subject, and include the verb 'are'. Avoid possessive 'brother's' here.

× That's why I don't have any or any same hobbies with my family members.

✓ That's why I don't have any hobbies in common with my family members.

Simplify the phrase to 'any hobbies in common' to express lacking shared hobbies. Remove redundant 'any' and use 'in common' instead of 'same ... with' for natural English.