Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and clear: give a direct topic sentence, then briefly list hobbies with correct verbs and simple linking words. Avoid hesitations and grammatical errors. Limit to 2–4 sentences. Also provide one specific detail (how often or why).

예시: I have several hobbies. I enjoy driving and taking photographs, and recently I have been going to the gym to improve my fitness. I usually go to the gym three times a week because it helps me feel healthier and more energetic.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence about childhood hobbies, use past tense consistently, and give one specific detail or reason. Use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect ideas. Keep it concise and coherent.

예시: When I was a child, I enjoyed horse riding and swimming. I rode horses regularly for a few years and sometimes visited the local pool on weekends. Over time my interests changed as I grew older.

제안: Answer directly with a clear statement whether you still have the hobby. Use correct grammar (present perfect or present simple) and give a specific example or feeling. Avoid vague or broken phrases and keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I have kept horse riding as a hobby since childhood. I have a strong bond with horses and still enjoy riding occasionally because it relaxes me and makes me feel connected to nature.

제안: Respond clearly and confidently. Use present simple for habits, correct subject-verb agreement, and provide a brief contrast with a linking word like 'however'. Give a short reason or example to support your statement.

예시: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. My mother enjoys cooking and my father does not have any particular hobbies, so our interests are quite different; for example, I prefer going to the gym while my mother spends time experimenting with new recipes.

× Yes I found off to do some driving, some pictures and it's these days I am try to improve my body and go to the gym. These are my hobbies.

✓ Yes. I enjoy doing some driving, taking pictures, and these days I am trying to improve my fitness and go to the gym. These are my hobbies.

The student used incorrect verbs and forms: 'found off to do' is incorrect and should be 'enjoy doing' (verb + -ing). 'some pictures' should be 'taking pictures' (verb + -ing). 'I am try' is wrong because after 'am' the present participle is required: 'I am trying'. Also 'improve my body' is unnatural; 'improve my fitness' fits better. Use consistent gerund forms for hobbies. Suggestion: Use 'enjoy + verb-ing' for activities, and after 'be' use verb-ing for continuous actions.

× When I was a child I went to horse riding and sometimes I go to the pool but and then my hobbies are definitely change for them.

✓ When I was a child I went horse riding and sometimes I went to the pool, but then my hobbies definitely changed.

Mixed and incorrect tenses and verb forms: 'went to horse riding' should be 'went horse riding' or 'rode horses'. 'sometimes I go' mixes present with past context; it should be past 'sometimes I went'. 'my hobbies are definitely change' is present + base verb; correct past passive/active is 'my hobbies definitely changed'. Suggestion: Keep past tense throughout when describing childhood ('went', 'changed'). Use correct verb forms ('went horse riding' or 'rode horses').

× In my childhood I went to a go horse riding and I really found them fond of this activities and I have a different bond with the animals.

✓ In my childhood I used to go horse riding and I really became fond of this activity; I have a special bond with the animals.

Multiple issues: 'went to a go horse riding' is incorrect; use 'used to go horse riding' or 'used to go riding'. 'found them fond of this activities' is wrong structure: 'became fond of this activity' uses correct verb and singular noun. 'this activities' should be 'this activity' (singular). Use present 'have a bond' for ongoing state. Suggestion: Use 'used to + base verb' for habitual past actions and 'become/become fond of' for developing feelings. Use correct singular/plural agreement for 'activity/activities'.

× Also horse are my feeding my soul so I really love to do spend.

✓ Also horses feed my soul, so I really love to spend time with them.

'horse are my feeding my soul' has number and structure errors. 'horse' should be plural 'horses' or 'a horse' depending on meaning; here general plural 'horses feed my soul' is natural. 'my feeding my soul' is ungrammatical; use active verb 'feed'. 'I really love to do spend' duplicates verbs; correct phrase is 'love to spend time'. Suggestion: Use plural for general statements about animals and correct verb phrases like 'feed my soul' and 'spend time'.

× Uh, I really don't think so because my mom loved to do cooking. Uh, but my dad, he don't have any hobbies so we are so different.

✓ Uh, I really don't think so because my mom loves cooking. But my dad doesn't have any hobbies, so we are very different.

Tense and agreement errors: 'my mom loved to do cooking' uses past 'loved' but context implies general habit—use present 'loves'. Also 'loves cooking' is idiomatic rather than 'loved to do cooking'. 'he don't have' is incorrect third person singular; use 'he doesn't have'. 'so we are so different' is repetitive; use 'very different' or 'quite different'. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual facts (loves) and ensure subject-verb agreement with third person singular ('doesn't').