Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答过于简短且不够自然。应直接用主题句回答后，补充具体内容并使用连接词。比如说明有哪些爱好、频率或喜爱的原因。避免泛泛而谈。

예시: Yes, I have several hobbies. For example, I enjoy reading novels, cycling in the park at weekends, and cooking new recipes. These activities help me relax and keep me healthy.

제안: 句子有语法错误且表达不清。应该用过去时说明童年爱好，并提供具体细节，如喜欢看的节目或原因。使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: Yes, when I was a child I loved watching cartoons on TV. I often watched them after school because they made me laugh and I liked the colorful characters.

제안: 回应过短且缺乏细节。应在肯定句后用补充信息说明具体是什么爱好、如何保持至今、以及对你的意义。使用连接词连接原因或例子。

예시: Yes, I do. I have loved drawing since I was a child, and I still sketch every week because it helps me express my ideas and relax.

제안: 回答不自然且不完整。应直接说明是否相同，并列举具体家庭成员和共同或不同的爱好，给出原因或一个小比较。

예시: Yes, partly. For instance, my father and I both enjoy hiking, but my sister prefers painting. We sometimes go hiking together on holidays.

× Yes, I like her watching TV.

✓ Yes, I liked watching TV.

原句语法问题属于动词后接 -ing 形式使用不当（类型 8）。句子中出现了不必要的代词 “her”，且时态不符合问题“Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?”（过去时）。正确表达应把动词 like 用过去式 liked，并且在表示“看电视”这一活动时用动名词 watching，而不加代词。建议：在回答关于童年时的爱好时将动词改为过去式，并直接用动名词短语（liked watching TV）。

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I do.

原句错误属于代词/短语使用不当（类型 12）。当被问到 “Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?” 时，助动词 do 用于代替动词短语 have（现在时），正确的简短肯定回答应为 “Yes, I do.” 而不是 “Yes, I have.”（后者在此不符合常用回答方式，容易被理解为不完整）。建议：用 do 代替 have 作简略肯定回答，或完整回答为 “Yes, I have the same hobbies.”