Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a complete sentence that directly answers the question and add a brief supporting detail. Avoid one-word or two-word answers and use a linking phrase if you add another point.

예시: Yes, I enjoy painting and writing short poems. I usually paint landscapes on weekends, and I find writing rhymes helps me relax after a busy day.

제안: Use correct tense and a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples with linking words. Correct grammatical errors (past tense) and avoid filler words.

예시: Yes, I had many hobbies as a child because I was very curious. For example, I enjoyed collecting insects and building model cars, which taught me patience and how things work.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence in the correct form, then add brief supporting details using linking words. Remove hesitations and correct small grammar mistakes ("since childhood").

예시: Yes, I have enjoyed playing badminton and running since childhood. My father introduced me to badminton when I was seven, and I still train regularly because it keeps me fit and competitive.

제안: Answer directly in a full sentence and expand with one specific detail or example using a linking phrase to make the response natural and informative. Reduce hesitations like "umm."

예시: Yes, we share similar hobbies — we are a family of runners. For instance, we often run together on Sunday mornings and sometimes participate in local 5K events as a group.

× Painting and rhyming.

✓ I enjoy painting and writing poems.

The original reply is a fragment lacking a subject and verb, which is acceptable in casual speech but not grammatically complete. 'Rhyming' is vague; 'writing poems' clarifies the hobby. Use a full sentence with subject and verb to answer the examiner's question clearly.

× Yes, of course. I have a lot of hobbies when I was a child because I tend to be a little bit explore. Yeah, exploring.

✓ Yes, of course. I had a lot of hobbies when I was a child because I tended to be a little bit curious and liked exploring.

Tense mismatch: 'have' should be past 'had' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Tend' should be past 'tended'. 'Explore' is the base form; use adjective 'curious' and phrase 'liked exploring' or gerund 'exploring'. This corrects tense consistency and word form.

× I do have a hobby since I was a childhood. It's actually umm, playing badminton and running.

✓ I have had a hobby since I was a child. It's actually playing badminton and running.

'Since I was a childhood' is incorrect: 'childhood' is a noun meaning the period, but the correct phrase is 'since I was a child' or 'since childhood'. Also for an action continuing from past to present use present perfect 'have had' or simply 'have had since'. Here 'I have had a hobby since I was a child' or 'I have had these hobbies since I was a child' is appropriate.

× It was originally introduced to me by my father.

✓ It was originally introduced to me by my father.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses past passive appropriately to indicate the hobby was introduced in the past. No change needed.

× Yes, umm, actually we are a family of runners.

✓ Yes. Actually, we are a family of runners.

The original is understandable and nearly correct; the main issue is punctuation and filler 'umm'. Provide a clear sentence without hesitation. The structure 'we are a family of runners' is acceptable; just remove filler sounds for clearer spoken/written grammar.