Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えは短く直接的で良いですが、文法ミスと語順の不自然さがあり、具体例や頻度などの詳細が不足しています。改善ポイント：1) 文法（冠詞や複数形、時制）を直す。2) トピック文の後に1つか2つの具体的な詳細（例えばどんな料理を作るか、どのくらいの頻度で作るか、最近作った料理名）を加える。3) リンク語（for example, often, recently）を使って流れを良くする。

예시: Yes, I do. My main hobby is cooking, and I often try new recipes on weekends. For example, last month I learned to make Thai green curry, which was challenging but very rewarding.

제안: 答えの意図は伝わりますが、多くの文法エラーと不自然な表現（'every year I am', 'new trees'）があり、意味が曖昧です。改善ポイント：1) 文法と語彙の誤りを直す（過去形や表現の自然さ）。2) 事実を具体的に述べる（何歳の頃、どの巻を楽しみにしていたか）。3) 文を繋ぐために適切な接続語（for example, I used to, I was excited about）を使う。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child I enjoyed reading books, especially the Harry Potter series. For example, I used to wait excitedly each year for the next book to be released.

제안: 答えは比較の構造を含んでいて方向性は良いですが、表現が不明瞭（'No worries about the fantasy world'）で文法も改善が必要です。改善ポイント：1) 明確な対比表現を使う（used to... but now...）。2) 具体的なジャンルや理由を述べる（なぜ興味が変わったのか）。3) 文を簡潔にまとめ、接続語（however, now, because）を適切に使う。

예시: Yes, I've had a passion for reading since childhood. I used to enjoy fantasy novels like Harry Potter, but now I prefer non-fiction books because I like learning about real-world topics.

제안: 答えはポイントを押さえていますが、文法（主語と動詞の一致）と語順、曖昧な部分（'uh also is different'）が目立ちます。改善ポイント：1) 正しい動詞の形を使う（my husband also likes）。2) 違いを具体的に説明する（どのジャンルが好きか）。3) フィラー（uh）を避けて自然な接続語で続ける。

예시: Yes, he also enjoys reading, but his tastes are different from mine. For example, he prefers historical fiction while I mainly read non-fiction books about science and society.

× Yes I do, my hobby is cooking so sometimes I try new recipe.

✓ Yes I do. My hobby is cooking, so sometimes I try new recipes.

The noun 'recipe' should be plural 'recipes' because 'sometimes' indicates repeated occasions involving more than one recipe. Also add punctuation and a comma for clarity.

× For example, I love Harry Potter, so every year I am. I was looking forward to new trees.

✓ For example, I loved Harry Potter, so every year I was looking forward to new titles.

The speaker refers to a past habit, so 'love' should be past tense 'loved' and 'I was looking forward to' should be continuous past without the stray 'I am'. 'New trees' is likely a miswording; 'new titles' or 'new books' fits context. Ensure verb tense consistency.

× Yes, I like reading books now. For example, when I was a child I loved No worries about the fantasy world. However, I like non-fiction novels now.

✓ Yes, I like reading books now. When I was a child I loved the fantasy world and had no worries about it. However, I prefer non-fiction novels now.

The sentence 'loved No worries about the fantasy world' is ungrammatical and unclear. Rephrase to 'loved the fantasy world and had no worries about it.' Also use 'prefer' to contrast past and present preferences. Maintain present tense 'like' for current habit.

× Yes I do, my husband also like reading books.

✓ Yes I do. My husband also likes reading books.

Subject-verb agreement: with third person singular subject 'my husband', the verb requires an -s: 'likes'. Also separate into two sentences for clarity.

× However his favorite uh also is different from mine.

✓ However, his favorite genres are different from mine.

Original has filler 'uh' and awkward word order. 'Favorite' needs a noun 'genres' or 'books' and plural agreement if there are multiple favorites. Reorder to 'his favorite genres are different from mine' for natural structure.