Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子不够自然，语法和时态有错误，信息也不够具体。回答应直接回应问题（有/没有），然后用一两句具体细节支持。注意主谓一致、动词形式和连词使用，避免冗余。可以说明什么时候、和谁、为什么唱歌以及频率。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing. I often sing with my friends during long study sessions to relax and express myself. We usually meet once a week and choose pop songs to practice harmony.

제안: 回答包含内容但时态和用词不准确，表达有些重复。应先给主题句，然后用具体时间/频率和原因说明变化，使用连词使逻辑清晰。避免模糊词如“lazy”，可用更中性表达。

예시: Yes, I did. As a child I often ran around the playground and played tag with my friends. However, as I grew older I became less active because of studying, so I rarely go running now.

제안: 回答结构基本合格，但有词汇错误（pants→paints）且细节可以更具体。可以说明喜欢的题材、使用的材料、以及现在如何延续这一爱好，用连词衔接句子。

예시: Yes, I do. I've loved painting since I was a child and used to paint landscapes and animals with bright paints. Today I still enjoy being creative by decorating my diary with stickers and small sketches.

제안: 语气不够礼貌且有语法错误（主谓一致、动词形式）。避免贬低家人（如“lazy”），用更中性表达比较好。先直接回答，然后比较各自的爱好并给出简短例子。

예시: No, we don't share the same hobbies. I enjoy painting, my father prefers playing sports like basketball, and my mother likes browsing social media on her phone in her spare time.

× Yes I have such as I like singing.

✓ Yes. I have hobbies; for example, I like singing.

原句中表达不流畅且缺少连接词。将 such as（举例短语）替换为 for example 并用分号或句号连接，使句子结构完整且自然。

× I often singing with my friends during long study to realize myself.

✓ I often sing with my friends during long study periods to relax and express myself.

原句中主语与动词时态不一致，应使用动词原形 sing 与主语 I 配合；此外 long study 表达不自然，改为 long study periods，并把 realize myself 更正为常用表达 relax and express myself。

× When I was a child I often like running in the playground, but when I was growing I think I become more and more lazy and don't like to run anymore.

✓ When I was a child, I often liked running in the playground, but as I grew up I became lazier and didn't like to run anymore.

原句时态混乱：描述过去的习惯要用过去时 often liked；'when I was growing' 不自然，改为 as I grew up；后半句要用过去时 became 和 didn't like。

× Yes I do. I think it's painting in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I do. I think it was painting in my childhood.

这里谈论过去的情况，应使用过去时 was 而不是现在时 is/it's。

× I like painting the things I saw with colorful pants, and now I also like beautiful stickers to decorate my diary.

✓ I like painting the things I saw with colorful paints, and now I also like using pretty stickers to decorate my diary.

原句中把 paints 写成 pants（裤子），是词汇错误；beautiful stickers 描述贴纸更自然用 pretty stickers；此外加上 using 使结构更流畅。

× No I don't. I think I like painting and my father like do sports but my mother is lazy and I don't think she have any hobbies I think she only like play the mobile phone.

✓ No, I don't. I like painting and my father likes doing sports, but my mother is lazy and I don't think she has any hobbies; I think she only likes playing on her mobile phone.

原句存在主谓一致错误：father 单数应用 likes；动词搭配应为 likes doing sports；she 的动词应为 has；表达喜好要用 likes，后接动名词 playing，并用 on her mobile phone 表示在手机上。