Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğal ama dağınık ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Cümleleri kısa ve net tut; gereksiz tekrarları çıkar; doğru zaman ve çoğul kullanımlarına dikkat et. Bağlaçlarla fikirleri düzenle (ör. "and", "also", "such as"). Örnek olarak hobileri tek bir giriş cümlesiyle belirtip ardından her bir hobi için kısa açıklama ekleyin.

예시: Yes, I have a few hobbies that help me relax. For example, I enjoy playing basketball and football because they keep me active and let me unwind. I also like reading books, especially novels and non-fiction about history.

제안: Cevap net ama bazı dilbilgisi ve akıcılık sorunları var. Zaman ifadelerini ve artikelleri düzelt; gereksiz tekrarları azalt; bağlaçlarla neden veya alışkanlıkları açıklayın (ör. "because", "so"). Ayrıca örnek bir anı eklemek konuşmayı zenginleştirir.

예시: Yes, I used to play on my school's basketball team when I was a child because I loved the game. I remember practicing after classes several times a week, and it became a big part of my routine.

제안: Cümle yapısı ve zaman uyumu üzerinde çalışın; çoğul ve kişi uyumunu düzeltin. Daha açık bir konu cümlesi kurup, ardından kısa destekleyici detay verin. Ayrıca "still" ve "have" kombinasyonunu doğru kullanın (ör. "I still play basketball"). Arkadaşlarla buluşma rutininden kısa bir örnek verin.

예시: Yes, I still play basketball regularly. My closest friends and I often get together on weekends to play, and we've done this since we graduated from high school.

제안: Cevapta "And not definitely" gibi ifadeler doğal değil; daha uygun şekilde "Not really" veya "Not exactly" kullanın. Dilbilgisi ve artikelleri düzeltin ("a fan of books" → "fans of books"). Bağlaçlarla karşılaştırma yapın (ör. "however", "although") ve kısa örnek verin hangi tür kitapları paylaştığınızı.

예시: Not exactly. My parents are older so they no longer play sports, but we do share some hobbies. For instance, we are both fans of reading, and we often recommend novels and history books to each other.

× Yes definitely I have some hobbies which I loves me to unwind and escape from daily stress such as playing basketball and football and reading books are one of my hobbies.

✓ Yes, definitely I have some hobbies that help me unwind and escape from daily stress, such as playing basketball and football, and reading books is one of my hobbies.

The sentence misuses relative pronouns and subject pronoun agreement: 'which I loves me' is ungrammatical. Use 'that help me' where 'hobbies' (plural) requires the verb 'help' (present tense) and 'me' is the object. Also combine items clearly and make the clause about reading books singular: 'reading books is one of my hobbies.' Suggestions: use 'that' or 'which' correctly, ensure verb agrees with its subject, place 'me' after the verb, and keep parallel structure for listed hobbies.

× Yes, when I was a child, I used to play basketball in school team. I was a fan of basketball and whenever I free sometime I was thinking about playing basketball.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I used to play basketball on the school team. I was a fan of basketball and whenever I had free time I thought about playing basketball.

Several tense and word-choice errors: use 'on the school team' (preposition), 'free time' not 'free sometime', and 'was thinking' should be 'thought' to match the habitual past context. 'Used to' already indicates habitual past, so follow-up clauses should use past simple. Suggestions: use appropriate prepositions, correct noun phrases ('free time'), and keep consistent past tense for habitual actions.

× Yes, I have still playing basketballs. Then we gather with my friends, who has been my closest friends ever since we graduated from high school.

✓ Yes, I still play basketball. We get together with my friends, who have been my closest friends ever since we graduated from high school.

Errors: 'have still playing basketballs' mixes present perfect with continuous incorrectly and pluralizes 'basketball' unnecessarily. Use simple present 'I still play basketball.' 'Then we gather' is better as 'We get together' for habitual present. 'Who has been' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural, so use 'who have been.' Suggestions: use simple present for habitual actions, keep nouns in correct singular form when referring to the activity, and ensure subject-verb agreement for plural antecedents.

× And not definitely. My parents are older so they can't play basketball nowadays. However, some hobbies are similar like reading books. We both are fan of books.

✓ Not really. My parents are older, so they can't play basketball nowadays. However, some hobbies are similar, like reading books. We are both fans of books.

Several issues: beginning a sentence with 'And' is informal and 'not definitely' is incorrect; use 'Not really.' 'So' needs a comma before the result clause. 'Some hobbies are similar like' should be 'similar, like' or 'similar to each other, such as.' 'We both are fan' has article and number errors; use 'We are both fans of books.' Suggestions: avoid starting with 'And' in formal responses, use correct phrases ('Not really'), punctuate before conjunctions, and ensure correct article and plural agreement for 'fans.'