Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答总体直接但较简单。需要在主题句后加入更多细节并使用连接词，使答案更自然流畅。例如说明你跳什么舞、多久练习、为什么让你开心，避免重复“dance/dancing”。

예시: Yes, I enjoy dancing, especially contemporary and hip-hop. I practise for about three hours a week at a local studio, and it makes me happy because it helps me relieve stress and express myself creatively.

제안: 时态和语法需改为过去式，且拼写错误（"Josie"疑为"jazz"或"jitter"等）。应使用连接词并提供具体例子，例如何时开始、谁教你、最喜欢的动作或回忆。

예시: Yes, I danced as a child too; I started taking lessons when I was six. I mostly learned hip-hop and jazz, and I remember performing at school shows which made me very proud.

제안: 回答过于简短，没有提供支持细节。应在主题句后补充连接词和具体信息，比如持续的原因、频率或影响，以展示语言能力。

예시: Yes, I have continued dancing since childhood, and I still practice a few times a week because it keeps me fit and improves my confidence.

제안: 句子语法和表达有误（"It's the only one in my family who likes dancing"），应改为更自然的否定句并解释原因或比较。加入连接词并举例会更好。

예시: No, I don't. I'm the only one in my family who enjoys dancing; my parents prefer reading and my sister likes painting, so our hobbies are quite different.

× Yes, I like dance because dancing makes me happy.

✓ Yes, I like dancing because dancing makes me happy.

句子中用詞不一致。動詞 like 後面若表達愛好，應使用動名詞形式（dancing）或名詞（dance）。此處兩側保持一致用 dancing 更自然。建議：固定搭配為 like + doing sth，故改為 "I like dancing"。

× When I was a child, I also like dancing.

✓ When I was a child, I also liked dancing.

此句描述過去的習慣或狀態，應使用過去時。原句使用現在時 like 與時間狀語 "When I was a child" 時態不一致。建議：描述過去時用 liked。

× I like hip hop and Josie.

✓ I like hip hop and jazz.

原句中的 "Josie" 似為人名，與前面的音樂類型 hip hop 並列不合語義；若原意為另一種舞蹈或音樂類型，應改為正確名詞（例如 jazz）。若真為人名，需更明確表達。建議：確認要表達的項目並使用相同類別的名詞。

× No, I don't. It's the only one in my family who likes dancing.

✓ No, I don't. I'm the only one in my family who likes dancing.

原句用 "It's the only one" 指代家庭中唯一喜歡跳舞的人，語法和指代不正確。應使用主語 "I"（我是家裡唯一一個）或正確的名詞結構 "the only one in my family who likes dancing is me"。建議：直接說 "I'm the only one..." 更簡潔明確。