Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Старайтесь давать более связные, грамматически правильные и компактные ответы. Начните с темы, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных подробности о каждом хобби, используя связующие слова (for example, also, and) и избегайте повторов и неверных окончаний. Следите за согласованием времен и артиклями.

예시: I have three main hobbies. First, I play basketball for my school team, which I train with three times a week. I also enjoy swimming because it helps me relax and stay fit. Finally, I love traveling and usually visit a new city every summer.

제안: Улучшите произношение и выбор слов, а также используйте простые и правильные структуры. Давайте одно-два конкретных примера и поправляйте ошибки с артиклями и формами глаголов. Используйте связки (for example, also, when I was young) для логики ответа.

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child I enjoyed sports, especially skating and swimming. I also liked drawing and often went for evening walks with my parents.

제안: Сформулируйте ответ кратко и ясно: назовите хобби, укажите длительность и добавьте причину или пример. Избегайте нерелевантных фраз и грамматических ошибок (артикли, число, времена).

예시: Yes, basketball has been my hobby since childhood. I have played it for over ten years because it keeps me active and I enjoy the team spirit.

제안: Отвечайте прямо и добавляйте конкретные детали и связки. Исправьте ошибки в конструкции предложения и предлогах (for example, my mother is passionate about). Можно добавить краткое утверждение о том, как вы относитесь к их хобби.

예시: Not really. My family members have different interests: my mother is passionate about learning English, and my sister enjoys swimming. I support them and we sometimes practice our hobbies together.

× Yes, I have some hobbies and I can say about 3 of my hobbies The first hobby is playing basketball, I play for my basketball school team. The second hobby is swimming, I like to swim in my free time. And the last hobby is that I like traveling. I travel almost every summer and.

✓ Yes, I have several hobbies and I can tell you about three of them. The first is playing basketball; I play for my school basketball team. The second is swimming; I like to swim in my free time. The last is traveling; I travel almost every summer.

The original contains run-on sentences, missing punctuation, awkward phrasing, and an incomplete sentence. Combine ideas using proper punctuation and concise expressions (e.g., 'tell you about three of them', 'school basketball team'). Ensure each sentence is complete and ends properly. Suggestions: use separators (commas, semicolons) or split into shorter sentences, use 'several' or 'three' instead of 'about 3', and finish sentences completely.

× Yes, I yes, I did some sports. It was a skin and a swimming. I also had a hobby like drawing and I liked to walk in walked for walk with my parents at in the evening.

✓ Yes, I did some sports. It was skiing and swimming. I also had a hobby of drawing, and I liked to go for walks with my parents in the evening.

Errors include repetition, wrong word choice ('skin' should be 'skiing'), incorrect articles and prepositions, and verb form issues ('go for walks' instead of 'walked for walk'). Use 'a hobby of drawing' or 'hobby: drawing', and 'go for walks with my parents in the evening.' Suggestions: choose correct noun forms (skiing), use 'go for walks', and correct prepositions ('in the evening').

× Yes, I heard that kind of hobby. For me it's basketball. I like to play basketball every day. For me it's an important sports in my life and I can't believe that and one moment I should stop to do it.

✓ Yes, I have had that hobby since childhood. For me, it's basketball. I like to play basketball every day. It is an important sport in my life, and I cannot imagine ever having to stop playing it.

Problems: 'heard that kind of hobby' is incorrect; use 'have had that hobby since childhood'. 'An important sports' should be 'an important sport' (singular). 'I can't believe that and one moment I should stop to do it' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'I cannot imagine ever having to stop playing it.' Suggestions: use present perfect 'have had' for a hobby continuing from childhood, ensure singular/plural agreement for 'sport', and use clearer expressions for hypothetical/imagined situations.

× I I don't think so because my family members have other hobbies. For example my mom is crazy about English and my sister likes to swim. I don't mind to they do their hobbies.

✓ I don't think so because my family members have other hobbies. For example, my mom is crazy about English, and my sister likes to swim. I don't mind that they do their hobbies.

Errors: repeated 'I', missing commas, and incorrect structure 'I don't mind to they do'—the correct pattern is 'I don't mind that they do' or 'I don't mind them doing'. Suggestions: remove repetition, add punctuation, and use correct complementation after 'mind' (either 'I don't mind that they do their hobbies' or 'I don't mind them doing their hobbies').