Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and use accurate verb forms and natural collocations. Say “I often chat with my friends” instead of “I am stand chatting,” and use “discuss our assignments” rather than “discuss about our assignment.” Add one clear reason and one specific example, but avoid confusing phrases such as “it happy and bad.”

예시: Yes, I do. I often chat with my friends after class, especially when we need to discuss our assignments or plan a trip. I enjoy it because chatting helps me relax and makes an ordinary day more enjoyable.

제안: Organize the answer around two or three clear topics. Use correct expressions such as “our assignments,” “sometimes,” “plan a weekend trip,” and “whether an outfit suits me.” Link the ideas with “also” or “for example,” and remove unfinished or unclear phrases.

예시: We usually talk about our assignments and make plans for the weekend. For example, we might decide where to go for coffee or organize a short trip. We also ask each other for advice, such as whether a particular outfit suits us.

제안: State your preference clearly and give one logical reason. Replace unclear expressions such as “target group,” “spot sweet,” and “100 output 100%” with natural language. Use “a group of people,” “share different ideas,” and a linking phrase such as “because” or “also.”

예시: To be honest, I prefer chatting with a group of people. I enjoy hearing different opinions and sharing several ideas in one conversation. It is also more convenient because everyone can make plans together.

제안: Use a clear comparison between the two communication methods. Correct the grammar in “it depends” and “when it comes,” and explain the situations more precisely. For example, say that face-to-face communication is useful for explaining assignments, while social media is convenient for making plans.

예시: It depends on the situation. I prefer face-to-face communication when I need to explain an assignment because it is easier to understand each other quickly. However, I usually use social media to make plans, such as deciding where to go for coffee.

제안: Answer the question directly by saying whether you sometimes argue with friends. Explain that disagreements are normal, then describe how you resolve them. Use clearer grammar and vocabulary, such as “We sometimes disagree,” “I listen to my friend’s opinion,” and “we talk about it calmly later.”

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue, usually when we have different opinions about a plan. However, I do not want the disagreement to damage our friendship, so I listen to my friend and explain my point of view calmly. We normally talk about it later and reach an agreement.

× I usually chat with my friend after class, and we discuss our assignment.

✓ I usually chat with my friends after class, and we discuss our assignments.

Friends and assignments refer to more than one person or task, so they should be plural.

× I am stand chatting with my friend after class.

✓ I usually chat with my friends after class.

The question asks about a usual habit, so use the simple present, chat, rather than the incorrect form am stand chatting.

× I find chatting with friend is joy and more relax and avoid boring day it happy and bad.

✓ I find chatting with friends enjoyable and relaxing, and it helps me avoid boring days.

Enjoyable and relaxing are the correct adjective forms. Joy and relax cannot be used in these positions. The revised sentence also uses clear adjective and noun forms: enjoyable, relaxing, and boring days.

× We usually talk a little bit about our assignment.

✓ We usually talk a little bit about our assignments.

Because the students have more than one assignment, assignment should be plural.

× Sometimes we plan it a weekend trip we just go on a coffee that or maybe something plan we need to plan at first.

✓ Sometimes we plan a weekend trip or decide to go to a coffee shop. We usually discuss the details first.

The original sentence combines several incomplete ideas without clear subjects, verbs, or conjunctions. Dividing the ideas into complete sentences makes the meaning clear.

× We just go on a coffee.

✓ We just go for coffee or go to a coffee shop.

The usual expressions are go for coffee and go to a coffee shop, not go on a coffee.

× I prefer to target group of people.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people.

A singular countable noun requires the article a. Also, chat with correctly expresses the meaning of communicating with people.

× I love I don't like to spot sweet too many app and many type.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group because I do not like using too many different apps or chatting in many different groups.

The original sentence contains several incomplete and disconnected clauses. The correction uses a clear subject, verb, conjunction, and parallel structures.

× I want to a group and say a different idea in one place.

✓ I want to join a group and share different ideas in one place.

The verb want must be followed by to plus a base verb, such as want to join. The noun group is singular and countable, so it correctly takes the article a.

× So I I definitely 100 output 100% of group chat person.

✓ So, I definitely prefer group chats.

The original sentence contains repeated words and an incomplete structure. Prefer group chats is a complete and natural sentence that answers the question directly.

× I would say it depend on the situation when it come to face-to-face interaction.

✓ I would say it depends on the situation when it comes to face-to-face interaction.

The subjects it and it require third-person singular verb forms: depends and comes.

× I prefer talk about a like place to go.

✓ I prefer talking about places to go.

After prefer, a gerund is natural in this structure: prefer talking. Places should be plural because the speaker is discussing possible destinations.

× I want to talk about install 10 teams who just explaining assignment quickly and when for while social media.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication when I need to explain an assignment quickly, but I use social media to talk about places to go.

The original sentence contains incomplete phrases and unclear word order. The correction uses two complete clauses joined by but and clearly contrasts the two communication methods.

× I usually agree with my friend because some people as a friend we need something wrong and something right.

✓ I usually agree with my friends because, as friends, we sometimes make mistakes and sometimes do the right thing.

Friends should be plural because the statement refers to friends in general. The correction also uses parallel plural expressions, make mistakes and do the right thing.

× To be perfectly honest, I would say sometime some reason I usually agree with my friend because as you know that some people as a friend we need something wrong and something right and I just talk with them later.

✓ To be perfectly honest, I sometimes argue with my friends. However, we usually talk about the problem later and agree with each other when we realize that we have both made mistakes.

The original response contains several unclear and incomplete clauses. The correction separates the ideas into complete sentences and uses clear conjunctions to show the relationship between arguing, discussing the problem, and reaching agreement.