Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and accurate: correct grammar (use “an introvert”), simplify and make the point clear in one topic sentence, then give a brief reason with a linking word. Avoid redundancy like “sharing more than talking in face to face.”

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I’m an introvert and find it easier to express myself online. For example, I feel less pressured and can think before I reply, so conversations feel more comfortable.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and then specific, coherent details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect structures; use examples and concrete subjects instead of repeating 'how'.

예시: We usually talk about daily life and mutual friends. For instance, we discuss work, hobbies, recent events, and sometimes share opinions about how others are doing or living.

제안: Be concise and correct grammar (“it’s easier”). Start with a direct answer then give a reason with a linking word. Remove fillers like “uh” and use a brief example to support the reason.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because it’s easier to follow the conversation and express my thoughts. For example, one-on-one talks let me discuss personal matters without interruptions.

제안: Structure your answer: state preference, then a contrasting clause for exceptions. Fix grammar (e.g. “in serious situations I prefer to talk face-to-face to avoid misunderstandings”) and avoid fillers. Provide a brief example of a serious situation.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it feels less stressful, but for serious matters I talk face-to-face to avoid misunderstandings. For example, I would meet someone in person to discuss important family or work issues.

제안: Answer directly then give a concise explanation with linking words and a specific example. Use correct tense and phrasing (e.g. “we argue sometimes, but it’s not serious; we usually joke afterwards”).

예시: We argue sometimes, but it’s never serious because we quickly make up and joke about it. For example, if we disagree about plans, we usually laugh it off and choose a compromise.

× Yes, I love chatting with my friends because I am a introvert person so I prefer sharing more than talking in face to face.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends because I am an introvert, so I prefer sharing more than talking face-to-face.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound: 'an introvert'. Remove 'person' because 'introvert' already functions as a noun; if used as adjective, write 'an introverted person'. Use commas to separate clauses. 'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective or fixed phrase and does not require 'in' before it when used as an adverbial phrase. Suggestion: say 'I am an introvert' or 'I am an introverted person'.

× We are gossiping a lot. We love to chat about how things are going in this day or how other people like how do they live or how do they do in.

✓ We gossip a lot. We like to chat about how things are going these days or how other people live and what they do.

Present simple is more natural for habitual actions: use 'We gossip' instead of 'We are gossiping a lot' when describing routines. Use 'these days' rather than 'in this day'. Do not use question word order in reported statements: 'how other people live' not 'how do they live'. Combine ideas clearly: 'what they do' instead of 'how do they do in'.

× I would like to say that I prefer talking with only one friend because I feel like it easier to handle and, uh, think about topic.

✓ I would like to say that I prefer talking with only one friend because I feel like it is easier to handle and to think about the topic.

Missing verb 'is' after 'it' causes sentence structure error. Use infinitive 'to think' for parallel structure with 'to handle'. Include the article 'the' before 'topic' if referring to a specific subject. Suggestion: remove fillers and say 'I prefer talking with one friend because it is easier to handle and to think about the topic.'

× Like I mentioned before, I am an introvert so I prefer communicating via social media rather than talking in person. However, in serious topic or serious situation, I would like to talk in face to face to uh, avoid miss.

✓ Like I mentioned before, I am an introvert so I prefer communicating via social media rather than talking in person. However, in serious topics or serious situations, I would like to talk face-to-face to avoid misunderstandings.

Use plural 'topics'/'situations' for general statements. 'Talk face-to-face' is correct; do not use 'in face to face'. 'Avoid miss' is not idiomatic; use 'avoid misunderstandings' or 'avoid miscommunication'. Also 'in' before 'serious topic' is unnecessary; use 'in a serious situation' if singular. Suggestion: 'in serious situations' or 'in a serious situation'.

× We argued a lot but none of them is serious. Like we fight each other but we still joking about it.

✓ We argue a lot, but none of the arguments are serious. We fight sometimes, but we still joke about it.

Tense consistency: use present simple 'argue' for habitual actions rather than past 'argued' if this is a recurring situation. 'None of them is serious' is unclear; use 'none of the arguments are serious'. 'We fight each other' is awkward; 'we fight sometimes' is more natural. 'We still joking' is missing the verb 'are' or should be 'we still joke about it'. Suggestion: keep tenses consistent and use plural agreement with 'none of the arguments are'.