Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and complete sentences; avoid trailing off. Start with a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific supporting details using linking words, and finish with a brief concluding remark. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes — I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and keeps me connected with them. For example, after a long day of studying we often share funny stories or catch up on news, which cheers me up. Overall, chatting helps me relieve stress and maintain close relationships.

제안: Avoid filler words (uh) and incomplete sentences. Give a clear topic sentence, then use linking words (for example, when, also, so) to list specific topics and one short example to illustrate. Keep sentences complete.

예시: We usually talk about everyday topics like our studies, future plans, and family. For example, last week we discussed a group project and shared ideas for dividing the work. We also talk about movies and online trends, and if a friend has a problem we offer advice and support.

제안: Complete the final thought and avoid long clauses without punctuation. Use linking words to contrast preferences (for example, however, although) and give a concise reason or an example for each preference. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: I generally prefer chatting with one close friend because one-to-one conversations feel more comfortable and I can speak freely. However, I enjoy group chats occasionally because they are lively and fun, for example at parties when everyone shares stories. So it depends on my mood and the situation.

제안: Finish the final sentence and avoid small grammar errors (e.g., 'who live far away'). Provide a concise contrast using linking words (although, but) and one specific example explaining why face-to-face is better for meaning. Keep it within 3 sentences.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more genuine and I can read facial expressions and tone of voice. Although social media is convenient for staying in touch with friends who live far away, it rarely allows for deep, meaningful conversations like an in-person chat does.

제안: Avoid sentence fragments and unclear phrasing. Give a clear topic sentence, then explain how you handle disagreements with one or two specific strategies and a brief reason. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) and keep it concise.

예시: Occasionally we argue, but it doesn't happen often. When disagreements occur, I try to stay calm and talk things through, asking questions to understand their view and finding a compromise, because I believe calm communication prevents conflicts from escalating.

× I think having a good.

✓ I think having good friends is important.

The original sentence is incomplete (sentence structure error). It ends abruptly with a fragment 'having a good.' Complete the thought by specifying what is good and providing a verb or noun phrase; here 'having good friends is important' completes the idea and fits the context of the answer.

× We also shared funny stories and sometimes discuss movies or interesting things, uh, we've seen online.

✓ We also share funny stories and sometimes discuss movies or interesting things we've seen online.

The verb 'shared' conflicts with present habitual context; the student describes usual activities, so present simple 'share' and 'discuss' should be used. The clause 'we've seen online' (present perfect) is acceptable to refer to recent experiences seen online; maintain it. Ensure tense consistency for habitual actions.

× If on one of my friends is facing a problem, we tend to talk about it and.

✓ If one of my friends is facing a problem, we tend to talk about it and support them.

The original has an extra word 'on' and ends abruptly. Remove 'on' for correct pronoun phrase 'one of my friends'. The sentence was also incomplete; add an appropriate clause such as 'support them'. Use 'them' as a singular gender-neutral pronoun to match 'one of my friends'.

× I generally prefer chatting with one close friend because I find one to one conversations more comfortable and personal, and I can express my thoughts more openly without being interrupted.

✓ I generally prefer chatting with one close friend because I find one-to-one conversations more comfortable and personal, and I can express my thoughts more openly without being interrupted.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'one to one' should be hyphenated as 'one-to-one' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. This fixes a style/structure issue and improves clarity.

× However, I also enjoy group conversations occasionally because they tend to be more lively and entertaining, especially when every.

✓ However, I also enjoy group conversations occasionally because they tend to be more lively and entertaining, especially when everyone participates.

The sentence ended in a fragment 'especially when every.' Complete it with 'everyone participates' to convey the intended meaning and restore proper sentence structure.

× Although social media is extremely convenient for keeping in touch with people who lives far away, I think meaningful conversations.

✓ Although social media is extremely convenient for keeping in touch with people who live far away, I think face-to-face conversations are more meaningful.

Use 'who live far away' because 'people' is plural and requires plural verb 'live' (pronoun/verb agreement). The original also ends with a fragment; complete the idea by contrasting with 'face-to-face conversations are more meaningful' to match context.

× Occasionally yes, but I wouldn't say we argue very often.

✓ Occasionally, yes, but I wouldn't say we argue very often.

Add commas for correct punctuation in 'Occasionally, yes,' to match natural speech pauses. This is a minor sentence structure/punctuation improvement.

× We sometimes have different opinions or misunderstand each other, but I usually try to stay calm and talk things through rather than or loving a small disagreement to become a serious conflict because I believe healthy.

✓ We sometimes have different opinions or misunderstand each other, but I usually try to stay calm and talk things through rather than letting a small disagreement become a serious conflict because I believe healthy communication is important.

The original contains several issues: 'rather than or loving' is incorrect and likely intended to be 'rather than letting.' Use the gerund 'letting' after 'rather than.' Also the sentence was unfinished and unclear at the end; complete it with 'because I believe healthy communication is important.' This fixes verb form (present participle/gerund) and completes sentence structure.