Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and natural but has some repetition, minor word choice errors (e.g., "iterative" is unnatural here) and slightly long sentences. Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences), start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Replace awkward vocabulary with appropriate words like "relaxing" or "refreshing."

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me unwind after a stressful day. For example, a short casual conversation about our day or a funny incident usually makes me feel more relaxed and refreshed.

제안: The answer addresses the question but contains unclear or incorrect phrases ("heavy water," "new wars") and has limited specific detail. Use clear, relevant vocabulary and give one or two concrete examples. Use a linking word to connect the reason and examples.

예시: We usually have short chats because we're busy with heavy workload and assignments. For instance, we talk about new classes, upcoming deadlines, or small personal updates like weekend plans.

제안: Your idea is clear but pronunciation/word choice issues appear in the transcript ("wave," "sis friends"). Improve accuracy by using correct phrases: "one person" or "one-on-one," "close friends." Keep structure: topic sentence + reason + brief example. Avoid filler phrases like "you know."

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a close friend. I find one-on-one conversations deeper and less chaotic, so I can discuss personal matters more comfortably, such as asking for advice or sharing concerns.

제안: Good preference and reasoning but avoid hesitation and filler words. Use concise language and a linking word to contrast options (e.g., "rather than"). Provide a short specific example showing why face-to-face is better.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication rather than social media because in-person talks feel more personal and less confusing. For example, when we meet, it's easier to read each other's expressions and resolve misunderstandings quickly.

제안: Your response is relevant but contains contradictions and many errors (grammar, word choice, unclear meaning). Start with a clear statement, explain typical reasons for arguments, and end with a brief result. Use correct verb forms and connectors.

예시: I don't often have serious arguments with friends, but we sometimes disagree due to different opinions. However, we usually talk things through calmly and clear up misunderstandings, which helps our friendship stay strong.

× I do really love having casual conversations with friends because I find these conversations a little bit iterative and fun.

✓ I really do love having casual conversations with friends because I find these conversations a little bit repetitive and fun.

The adverb placement and choice were incorrect. 'Do really love' is unnatural; place adverb before main verb: 'really do love' or simply 'really love'. 'Iterative' is wrong meaning; use 'repetitive' to describe something that happens again and again. Suggestion: use natural adverb placement and choose the adjective that matches intended meaning.

× Because if you have long stressful days, it's kind of rewarding and relaxing as well to have conversations with your friends.

✓ Because if you have long, stressful days, it is kind of rewarding and relaxing to have conversations with your friends.

Tense is okay but phrasing and punctuation need correction. Add comma between 'long' and 'stressful' as coordinate adjectives. Use 'it is' instead of contraction 'it's' if aiming for clarity; remove redundant 'as well'. Suggestion: streamline phrasing to avoid repetition.

× Well, we rarely hang out because of heavy water and assignments, so our conversations are normally short and casual.

✓ Well, we rarely hang out because of heavy work and assignments, so our conversations are usually short and casual.

'Heavy water' is a wrong collocation; likely intended 'heavy work' or 'a heavy workload'. Also 'normally' is acceptable but 'usually' is more natural here. Suggestion: use correct collocations like 'heavy workload' or 'a lot of work'.

× We mostly talk about what's been happening in our daily lives recently, like new classes, new wars, or small personal updates.

✓ We mostly talk about what has been happening in our daily lives recently, like new classes or small personal updates.

The tense 'what's been happening' is fine when expanded to 'what has been happening'. Remove 'new wars' which is incorrect and likely a mistranslation; it makes no sense in context. Suggestion: list relevant items only and keep verb contraction expanded for clarity.

× I would say I should wave only one person because I normally tend to have conversations within a small cycle of my sis friends.

✓ I would say I should wave only one person because I normally tend to have conversations within a small circle of my close friends.

Several word choice errors: 'wave only one person' is incorrect; likely 'prefer to talk to only one person' or 'prefer one-on-one'. 'Cycle' should be 'circle'. 'sis friends' is incorrect; probably 'close friends'. Subject-verb agreement per se not the main issue but overall word choices are wrong. Suggestion: use 'prefer to talk to one person' and 'small circle of close friends'.

× I feel more comfortable in that cycle because you know conversations are much more deeper and less chaotic and I can connect more easily.

✓ I feel more comfortable in that circle because conversations are much deeper and less chaotic, and I can connect more easily.

Use of comparative 'more deeper' is incorrect; 'deeper' already comparative, so remove 'more'. Also remove filler 'you know'. Replace 'cycle' with 'circle' as before. Suggestion: avoid double comparatives and fillers; use 'much deeper' or just 'deeper'.

× Well, I usually tend to lot more face to face conversations rather than through social media platforms because I would say in person conversations are a lot more, you know, deeper and less chaotic where you can, you know, connect more easily with your friends.

✓ Well, I usually have a lot more face-to-face conversations rather than communicating through social media, because in-person conversations are much deeper and less chaotic, and you can connect more easily with your friends.

Multiple errors: missing verb 'have' before 'a lot more', hyphenate 'face-to-face' and 'in-person' when used as adjectives, remove filler 'you know', and avoid comma splice. Use 'communicating through social media' for clarity. Suggestion: include main verb, hyphenate compound adjectives, and eliminate fillers.

× Well honestly I really argue with my friends but sometimes we have misunderstandings or differences of opinion.

✓ Well honestly I sometimes argue with my friends, but we also have misunderstandings or differences of opinion.

Tense/form needs adjustment: 'I really argue' is odd; 'I sometimes argue' fits context. Keep present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: use adverb 'sometimes' to indicate frequency and place it appropriately.

× Usually this happens becau because we see this differently but we always taught them to and our friendship stay strong.

✓ Usually this happens because we see things differently, but we always talk them through and our friendship stays strong.

Many errors: typo 'becau because', wrong verb 'taught' should be 'talk' or 'talk them through', 'stay' needs third-person singular 'stays', and 'we see this differently' better as 'we see things differently'. Suggestion: correct typos, use appropriate verbs for resolving misunderstandings ('talk them through' or 'discuss them'), and ensure subject-verb agreement.