Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and phrasing (e.g., “I prefer to talk to them” not “talking with them and offer them”).

예시: Yes, I do. Whenever I feel overwhelmed by my studies, I prefer to talk to my friends and often invite them for a coffee. It helps me relax and get a fresh perspective on my problems.

제안: Be more specific and use linking words to organise the list (e.g., “mainly about… and also…”). Use natural collocations like “school problems” and avoid redundancy.

예시: We mainly talk about how our day went and any problems we’re having at school. We also sometimes discuss relationships or dating, especially when someone needs advice.

제안: Open with a direct statement, then give a clear reason with linking words. Replace awkward phrasing (“with that”) with smoother connectors (“because”/“so that”).

예시: I prefer talking with a small group or just one friend. Because the conversation feels more private and natural, we can share personal thoughts without feeling self‑conscious.

제안: This answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Start with a direct preference (face‑to‑face or online), then explain why with one specific reason. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g., “It doesn’t matter” not “Doesn't matter”).

예시: I prefer face‑to‑face communication, although social media is fine for quick messages. Face‑to‑face chats allow me to read expressions and share feelings more honestly.

제안: Begin with a concise topic sentence and give a specific example or reason. Improve grammar (e.g., “that kind of thing” rather than “those type of things”) and avoid wordiness.

예시: I rarely argue with my friends because I don’t like escalating conflicts. If a disagreement arises, I usually talk it through calmly so we can resolve it quickly.

× Yes, every time I feel overwhelmed with studies I prefer talking with them and offer them to have coffee dates.

✓ Yes, whenever I feel overwhelmed with my studies, I prefer talking with them and offering to have coffee dates.

The sentence needs 'whenever' for temporal meaning and 'my studies' for correct possessive. Parallel structure requires gerunds after 'prefer': 'talking' and 'offering' (not 'offer them to'). Use 'offering to have coffee dates' or 'inviting them to have coffee' to maintain parallelism and correct verb form.

× We chat about how our day went and other problems in schools and also about our love life.

✓ We chat about how our day went, other problems at school, and our love lives.

Use 'problems at school' rather than 'in schools' for general reference; 'our love lives' should be plural to match 'we' (each person has a love life). Also add commas for clarity.

× Well, for me, I prefer to talk with a limited number of people because with that I think our conversation would be more private and be more natural.

✓ Well, I prefer to talk with a small number of people because I think our conversation will be more private and more natural.

'A limited number of people' is grammatically acceptable but 'a small number of people' is more natural here. 'Because with that' is awkward; remove it. Use 'will be' or 'is' for general preference; 'more natural' should parallel 'more private'.

× Over me. Doesn't matter if it's virtually or personally because as long as I can I can share my feelings then that's fine.

✓ It doesn't matter to me whether it's virtual or in person, as long as I can share my feelings, that's fine.

Original has sentence fragments and awkward phrasing. 'Over me' is incorrect; use 'to me'. 'Virtually or personally' should be 'virtual or in person' and 'whether' introduces the choice. Remove repeated 'I can' and combine clauses properly to form complete sentences.

× I don't usually argue with my friends because I'm a type of person who doesn't want to make that problem big. I always try to avoid those type of things.

✓ I don't usually argue with my friends because I'm the kind of person who doesn't want to make a problem bigger. I always try to avoid those kinds of things.

Use 'the kind of person' (not 'a type') for natural English. 'Make that problem big' is awkward; use 'make a problem bigger'. 'Those type of things' should be 'those kinds of things' to match pluralization and count.