Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and covers several points, but it is too long and repetitive. Aim for a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words sparingly and avoid repeating phrases like "I find" and "during our chatting."

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us catch up and relax. For example, on weekends we usually share recent experiences and plan activities, which also lets us learn from each other.

제안: Good range of topics but the response is slightly long and lists items without clear linking. Start with a concise topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples with brief explanations. Use linking words like "for example" appropriately.

예시: We talk about many things, especially daily routines and entertainment. For example, we recommend books and movies to each other and sometimes plan weekend outings based on those recommendations.

제안: Clear and directly answered with reasons. Improve by tightening language and avoiding repetition ("prefer" and "our"). Add a short example to illustrate what you mean by "deep and meaningful."

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it allows deeper conversation. For instance, with a close friend I can discuss personal goals and get thoughtful feedback, which I don't get in group chats.

제안: Good conditional answer but phrasing is awkward and contains small grammar errors. Keep sentences concise, correct verb forms, and use a clear linking phrase to contrast the two modes of communication.

예시: It depends. If a conversation is emotional or important, I prefer face-to-face meetings with local friends. For casual chats with friends abroad, I usually use social media or messaging apps.

제안: The idea is clear but the answer is wordy and has run-on sentences. Provide a direct topic sentence, then one specific example of how you resolve disagreements. Avoid repeating the same point.

예시: No, we rarely argue; we prefer calm discussions. For example, if we disagree about plans, we talk through each person's reasons and try to find a compromise.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends and I find it a wonderful way to catch up and share our experiences, stories and other future plans on weekends for example, as well as to relax and unwind, and I find it great to learn from each other during our chatting.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, and I find it a wonderful way to catch up and share our experiences, stories, and future plans, for example on weekends, as well as to relax and unwind; I also find it great to learn from each other when we chat.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and unnecessary repetition ('I find' twice) and the phrase 'during our chatting' is unnatural. Using 'when we chat' is a natural pronoun-related phrasing. Also punctuation and word order need adjustment for clarity. Suggest splitting into shorter clauses, removing repetition, and using 'when we chat' instead of 'during our chatting'.

× I usually chat with my friends about various things, For example, we mostly discuss our daily routine or new movies, other books that we've already read and recommend to each other to share our ideas and experiences, as well as planning our weekend.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about various things. For example, we mostly discuss our daily routines, new movies, and books that we've read and recommend to each other to share ideas and experiences, as well as planning our weekends.

Problems include wrong capitalization after a comma, incorrect preposition use ('planning our weekend' -> 'planning our weekends'), and list punctuation. Use plural 'daily routines' and 'weekends' for habitual actions. Break into two sentences for clarity.

× Personally, I prefer to chat with only one friend because I prefer more deep and meaningful conversation where we can share our perspectives, our thoughts and experiences.

✓ Personally, I prefer to chat with just one friend because I prefer deeper and more meaningful conversations where we can share our perspectives, thoughts, and experiences.

'Only one friend' is acceptable but 'just one friend' is more natural. 'More deep' is ungrammatical; use comparative adjective 'deeper'. Also use plural 'conversations' to match habitual preference. Remove redundant 'our' before thoughts and experiences for conciseness.

× So that kind of conversation is more important for me rather than just chatting with.

✓ That kind of conversation is more important to me than just chatting casually.

The original has a clumsy structure and a dangling preposition ('chatting with' lacks an object). Use 'more important to me than' and complete the comparison with 'chatting casually' to clarify meaning.

× Personally, I suppose that it depends, Let's say if I need to talk and discuss something meaningful, emotional, I prefer communicate face to face with my local friends and I find it better way to keep social media for friends from other countries.

✓ Personally, I suppose it depends. Let's say if I need to talk about or discuss something meaningful or emotional, I prefer to communicate face to face with my local friends, and I find it better to use social media for friends from other countries.

Run-on sentence and comma misuse create clarity issues. Need 'talk about' or 'discuss' and 'meaningful or emotional' joined by 'or'. Include the infinitive 'to communicate'. Add 'use' before 'social media' and correct punctuation by splitting into sentences or using commas appropriately.

× No, I wouldn't say that I argue with friends mostly we discuss and talk in a calm way, so it's better to discuss it in a friendly tone rather than going to argue and losing your friends.

✓ No, I wouldn't say that I argue with friends; mostly we discuss things calmly, so it's better to discuss issues in a friendly tone rather than argue and risk losing friends.

Original mixes clauses without proper separators. 'Going to argue' is unnatural here; use 'argue' and 'risk losing friends'. Modal 'wouldn't' is acceptable but punctuation and phrasing need correction. Use a semicolon or period to separate ideas and choose natural verbs.

× So we prefer discussing and sharing our perspectives even.

✓ So we prefer discussing and sharing our perspectives instead.

'Even' is incorrectly used as a sentence-final filler. 'Instead' fits the contrast intended. Also the sentence is short and needs the appropriate conjunction/substitute to express preference.