Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition (e.g. “whole day” twice) and fillers like “uh.” Add one specific example and a linking word to connect ideas. Keep to at most 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, we often share our daily routines and funny moments, which makes me laugh and feel supported. In addition, talking about plans helps me organise my week.

제안: Open with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples and use linking words. Avoid repeating words like “assignment” and correct grammar (e.g. “help us solve problems”). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I usually talk about daily life and university work with my friends. For instance, we exchange notes and discuss difficult assignment problems, which helps each of us understand the material better.

제안: Give a clear preference sentence and explain briefly with a reason. Fix grammar (singular/plural, word choice such as “secrets” not “secretaries”) and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like “because” to connect reason.

예시: Although I have a group of friends at university, I prefer talking one-on-one with my closest friend because I can share personal problems and trust her advice. She also confides in me, so we support each other.

제안: Start with a direct answer, then give a concise reason and one supporting detail. Correct phrasing (e.g. “on social media” and “in person” instead of “face to face”). Reduce repetition.

예시: I prefer communicating on social media because I feel more confident writing than speaking in person. For example, messaging allows me time to think before I reply and reduces social anxiety.

제안: Give a clear statement, then briefly explain how you handle conflicts. Fix grammar (e.g. “become an argument,” “we always try to agree”) and avoid repetition. Use one linking word like “however” or “but.”

예시: I usually don’t argue with my friends; however, small disagreements sometimes occur. When that happens, we try to resolve the issue quickly by talking calmly so the friendship isn’t affected.

× I like to chat with my friends, sharing my whole day, whole day plan and how I spend my days with my family members that will provide me entertainment and relaxation.

✓ I like to chat with my friends, sharing my whole day, my daily plans, and how I spend my days with my family members, which provides me with entertainment and relaxation.

The original sentence misuses verb forms and has agreement issues. 'Which will provide me entertainment' should be 'which provides me with entertainment' because 'which' refers to the activity in the present habitual sense (use present simple), and 'provides' agrees with singular noun phrase. Also add 'my' before 'daily plans' for parallel structure and 'with' after 'provides'. Use commas to separate items in the list for clarity.

× For instance, they also, uh, provide me uh, their whole routine, which will get entertainment to us.

✓ For instance, they also tell me about their whole routine, which entertains us.

Use simple present 'tell' or 'talk about' for habitual actions rather than 'provide me their routine'. 'Which will get entertainment to us' is awkward and incorrect tense/structure; use 'which entertains us' (present simple) to express a habitual result.

× Especially, I talk with my friends about my daily activities and sometimes about my academic activities too.

✓ I especially talk with my friends about my daily activities and sometimes about my academic activities too.

Move 'especially' to its typical position before the verb for natural word order. No article change needed, but repositioning improves sentence flow. This addresses sentence structure rather than article, but aligns with allowed types.

× About assignment, assignment problems.

✓ We also talk about assignments and assignment problems.

Original is a fragment lacking a clear structure. Combine into a complete noun phrase 'assignments and assignment problems' and include a verb in the previous sentence if needed for context.

× For example, we share our homework and notes with each other which will help to solve the problem.

✓ For example, we share our homework and notes with each other, which helps to solve problems.

Use 'helps' (present simple third-person singular) to agree with the singular noun phrase 'which' referring to the act of sharing. Also pluralize 'problem' or make it general 'problems' and add comma before the relative clause.

× Usually I have group of friend in my universities, but I prefer to share my all problems and secretaries with one friends which are very closer to me.

✓ Usually I have a group of friends at my university, but I prefer to share all my problems and secrets with one friend who is very close to me.

Multiple errors: 'a group of friends' requires 'a' and plural 'friends'; 'universities' should be singular 'university' if referring to where the student studies, or 'at university' idiomatically; 'share my all problems' should be 'share all my problems'; 'secretaries' is incorrect word — likely 'secrets'; 'one friends' should be 'one friend'; 'which are very closer to me' needs 'who is very close to me' and 'closer' is comparative and unnecessary here.

× She also give wants to share problems with me, so I like her the most.

✓ She also wants to share her problems with me, so I like her the most.

Original mixes verbs and pronouns incorrectly. Use 'wants' for third person singular and 'wants to share her problems' for correct object. Remove extraneous verb 'give'. Keep pronoun 'her' as object.

× I usually prefer to communicate or chat in the social media rather than using face to face because I feel less confidence in talking with people in face to face rather I am comfortable in talking with social media.

✓ I usually prefer to communicate or chat on social media rather than face-to-face because I feel less confident talking to people face-to-face, and I am more comfortable communicating via social media.

Use 'on social media' (correct preposition) not 'in the social media'. 'Face-to-face' is hyphenated when used as an adjective or adverb. 'Less confidence' should be 'less confident'. Use 'talking to people' (not 'in') and 'via social media' or 'on social media' for clarity. Also improve parallelism and reduce repetition.

× Usually I do not argue with my friends, but sometimes small problem may happen which may became a argument between us.

✓ Usually I do not argue with my friends, but sometimes a small problem may happen which may become an argument between us.

Use 'become' (base form after 'may') not 'became' (past). Include articles: 'a small problem' and 'an argument'. Correct word forms and maintain modal + base verb structure.

× But we we always want to make agreement and don't waste time arguing with each other.

✓ But we always try to reach an agreement and don't waste time arguing with each other.

Remove duplicate 'we'. 'Make agreement' is non-idiomatic; use 'reach an agreement' or 'agree'. 'Try to' or 'want to' can be used; 'try to reach an agreement' is more natural. Maintain parallel structure.