Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and streamline your answer. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, like), correct grammar (e.g., "it deepens our friendship"), and give one or two specific benefits. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I do. I often chat with my friends because it helps me relax and deepens our friendship. For example, talking about our problems or daily news brings us closer and improves mutual support.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words. Be specific about topics (news, personal updates, work). Fix sentence structure and tense. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: We usually talk about recent events and personal updates because we don't meet often. For example, we catch up on work, family news, and anything interesting that happened while we were apart.

제안: Provide a direct answer (group or one-on-one) or say you have no strong preference, then give reasons. Avoid repetition and fillers. Use linking words (however, because) and give a short example.

예시: I don't have a strong preference because both are enjoyable. One-on-one talks are deeper, while group chats are more fun and lively; for instance, I enjoy intimate conversations about problems but group chats are better for jokes and planning events.

제안: Good clear preference. Improve by removing hesitation and redundant words, and expand with a specific reason and brief example. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "see facial expressions").

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions and body language, which makes conversations clearer. For example, when discussing a sensitive issue, seeing someone's reaction helps me respond more appropriately.

제안: Answer directly and use correct collocations (e.g., "have arguments" not "have word" or "crash"). Explain briefly how you handle disagreements and give a concrete example. Avoid fillers.

예시: I rarely argue with my friends because I prefer to avoid conflict and keep the relationship positive. If we disagree, I try to change the subject or discuss the issue calmly, for example by saying, "Let's talk about this later when we're both calmer."

× Yes, definitely I always talk with people like my friend because it makes me feel lyrics relax and uh and also it deepen our friendship.

✓ Yes, definitely. I always talk with people like my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and it also deepens our friendship.

Issues: incorrect adjective/adverb form 'relax' should be past participle/adjective 'relaxed'; subject-verb agreement 'it deepen' needs third person singular 'deepens'; missing plural 'my friend' should be 'my friends' to match general meaning. Suggestion: use 'relaxed' to describe feeling, ensure verb agrees with singular subject and use plural when speaking generally about people.

× So it's have it has many benefits.

✓ So it has many benefits.

Redundant wording 'it's have it has' is ungrammatical. Use a single correct clause 'it has many benefits.' Suggestion: keep sentence concise and use correct verb form with the subject.

× Usually we talk about the current incident each other because for me I meet my friends not always so it's been a while to meet again so it we have many many to talk about.

✓ Usually we talk about recent events with each other because I do not meet my friends often, so when we meet again we have a lot to talk about.

Problems: 'the current incident' is awkward—use 'recent events'; 'each other' should follow 'with' to show reciprocity; 'I meet my friends not always' is incorrect word order and quantifier use—use 'do not meet... often'; 'it's been a while to meet again' incorrect phrasing—use 'when we meet again'; 'we have many many to talk about' missing noun—use 'a lot to talk about.' Suggestion: reorder clauses, use appropriate quantifiers ('often', 'a lot'), and correct prepositional use ('talk about', 'with each other').

× Yes and no, I don't have any particular preference to be honest because like any any chat makes me feel I am. Like I am loved by people so I don't care.

✓ Yes and no. I don't have any particular preference, to be honest, because any chat makes me feel like I am loved by people, so I don't mind.

Problems: disfluent fragments and punctuation; 'like I am. Like I am loved' broken sentence—should be combined and use 'like' to introduce a clause; 'I don't care' is better expressed as 'I don't mind' in this context. Suggestion: combine fragments into smooth clauses, use commas for clarity, and choose appropriate expressions for attitude.

× I definitely choose face to face conversations because I always perceive the opponent opponents, uh, facial expressions and it makes our talks smooth in face to face.

✓ I definitely prefer face-to-face conversations because I can always perceive the other person's facial expressions, and that makes our talks smoother in person.

Problems: 'choose' vs 'prefer'—'prefer' fits better; 'face to face' should be hyphenated 'face-to-face' when used as adjective; 'opponent opponents' wrong word—use 'other person' or 'the other person'; 'facial expressions' fine; 'it makes our talks smooth in face to face' awkward—use 'that makes our talks smoother in person.' Suggestion: use 'prefer', hyphenate compound adjectives, avoid repetition and choose correct nouns ('other person'), and use comparative adverb 'smoother.'

× I don't really have word with my friends because it might result in crash between our friendships.

✓ I don't really have arguments with my friends because that might result in a rift in our friendship.

Problems: 'have word with' is incorrect collocation—use 'have arguments' or 'have words with'; 'result in crash between our friendships' unnatural—use 'result in a rift in our friendship.' Suggestion: learn common collocations ('have words with', 'have an argument') and choose clearer nouns ('rift') for consequences.

× So I prefer uh, choosing a kind of enjoyable topic when I talk.

✓ So I prefer choosing enjoyable topics when I talk.

Problems: unnecessary filler 'uh,' awkward phrase 'a kind of enjoyable topic'—use 'enjoyable topics' plural for general preference; 'prefer choosing' is acceptable but 'prefer to choose' is also possible. Suggestion: remove fillers, use plural nouns for general statements and choose concise phrasing.