Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và rõ ràng ý chính: trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn. Tránh lặp từ, dùng liên từ phù hợp và ngữ pháp đúng (ví dụ: "it makes me feel close to my friends"). Nên dùng tối đa 3 câu, mỗi câu rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, I do. I usually spend an hour or two each day chatting with friends because it helps me feel close to them. For example, we share news about our day and support each other when we are stressed.

제안: Trả lời ngắn gọn, sử dụng danh sách rõ ràng và từ vựng chính xác. Tránh lỗi giới từ và trật tự từ (ví dụ: "I chat about my daily life, clothes, and food"). Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa.

예시: I usually talk about my daily life, like new clothes I bought and the meals we had. For example, yesterday I told them about a new skirt I bought and we discussed where to eat this weekend.

제안: Cần trả lời rõ ràng, dùng cấu trúc so sánh hợp lý và phát triển lí do cụ thể. Tránh từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: "see a lot of about my puppy"). Giải thích vì sao một người bạn hiểu bạn hơn nhóm và đưa ví dụ ngắn.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because conversations are more personal and private. For instance, I can talk about my problems or my pet without worrying about what others think, and my close friend often gives useful advice.

제안: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu 1-2 lý do rõ ràng, dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: "face-to-face is more personal and clear"). Tránh cấu trúc lặp và nói lan man. Có thể kết thúc bằng một ví dụ ngắn.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and it is easier to understand emotions and tone. For example, when discussing important issues, meeting in person helps avoid misunderstandings.

제안: Cần dùng thì và ngữ pháp đúng, tránh lặp từ. Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn quy trình giải quyết mâu thuẫn. Dùng linking words như "however", "afterwards" để mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Sometimes we do argue when our opinions differ, but we usually talk it through afterwards and try to understand each other. For example, if we disagree about plans, we explain our reasons and reach a compromise.

× Cheers, I usually spend one to two hours each day to share things with my friends because it can bring to me a strong chance of friendship and comfortable about my friends, about my life and I beside also consider to his or her about my daily life too.

✓ Cheers, I usually spend one to two hours each day sharing things with my friends because it gives me a strong sense of friendship and comfort about my friends and my life, and I also consider their opinions about my daily life.

The sentence has several preposition and verb form issues. Use 'spend ... sharing' rather than 'spend ... to share'; 'bring to me' is unnatural — use 'gives me'; 'comfortable about' should be 'comfort about' or better 'a sense of comfort regarding'; 'consider to his or her about' is incorrect — use 'consider their opinions about'. Suggestions: use correct verb+ing after 'spend', choose natural collocations (gives me, sense of comfort), and use appropriate pronouns ('their').

× I often chat about with my friends about my daily life such as my new clothes or uh as a T-shirt or skirt or so.

✓ I often chat with my friends about my daily life, such as new clothes, like T-shirts or skirts.

The phrase 'chat about with' is redundant; use 'chat with' or 'chat about'. Use plural agreement for items (T-shirts, skirts). Remove filler 'uh' and simplify. Use gerund not needed here; ensure correct preposition 'about'.

× Beside, I am also chatting with them about our food today such as we have meal at the time and I also share about them some story about me too.

✓ Also, I chat with them about what we ate today, such as the meal we had, and I also share some stories about myself.

Mixing present continuous 'am also chatting' with time adverb 'today' is awkward; simple present 'chat' or present perfect 'have chatted' fits better. 'we have meal at the time' is ungrammatical — use 'the meal we had'. 'share about them some story' should be 'share some stories about myself'. Use correct word order and pronouns.

× MMM I prefer to chat with only one friends more than a group of people because with one friend I can see a lot of about my puppy or my sad story and see all he is also can deep understand about me and shift me.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend rather than with a group of people because with one friend I can talk a lot about my puppy or my sad stories, and he can understand me more deeply and comfort me.

Plural mismatch 'one friends' should be 'one friend'. 'see a lot of about' is wrong — use 'talk a lot about'. 'see all he is also can deep understand about me and shift me' contains pronoun and verb errors; replace with 'he can understand me more deeply and comfort me.' Use correct subject-verb agreement and natural verbs ('understand', 'comfort').

× Lots of advice not about this story.

✓ He gives me lots of advice, not only about this story.

Sentence fragment and incorrect placement of 'not about this story'. Add subject and verb. 'Lots of advice' needs context; use 'gives me lots of advice' and clarify scope with 'not only about this story'.

× Oh, I prefer to communicate face to face than via social media because as you know, the social medias also only just connect with the Internet and have a big like interaction.

✓ Oh, I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because, as you know, social media only connect through the Internet and offer limited interaction.

'the social medias' is incorrect — use 'social media' (uncountable). 'only just connect with the Internet' is wordy; use 'only connect through the Internet'. 'have a big like interaction' is unclear; use 'offer limited interaction'. Also use 'rather than' not 'than' for preference. Remove unnecessary articles.

× Sometime, to be honest, we sometime has some, uh, contrasted about the viewpoint and about, uh, perspective.

✓ Sometimes, to be honest, we sometimes have some disagreements about viewpoints and perspectives.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (adverb). 'we sometime has' contains subject-verb disagreement and wrong form; use 'we sometimes have'. 'contrasted' is incorrect noun here — use 'disagreements'. Make nouns plural for general concepts ('viewpoints', 'perspectives').

× But after that we also and deep understand about him or her and he and she also understand with me and.

✓ But after that we come to understand each other better, and he or she understands me as well.

Phrase 'we also and deep understand about him or her' is ungrammatical. Use 'we come to understand each other better' or 'we understand each other better'. 'understand with me' is incorrect — use 'understands me'. Simplify and use reciprocal expression 'each other'.