Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần sửa ngữ pháp và rõ ràng hơn; nên có câu chủ đề trực tiếp, theo sau là chi tiết cụ thể và có liên kết. Tránh lỗi động từ (listen → listens/listening), từ sai (see chair → see/learn/learn about), và cấu trúc từ không chính xác. Hạn chế độ dài dưới 5 câu.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. They always listen to me and give useful advice. I often learn about new trends and useful information from our conversations, which helps me stay updated.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng (uh), dùng từ chính xác (love → relationships), và sắp xếp thông tin mạch lạc bằng liên kết như 'and' hoặc 'also'. Cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ nội dung.

예시: I usually talk about relationships and studying for IELTS with my friends. For example, we discuss practice strategies, share useful resources, and give each other feedback on speaking tasks.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng lặp từ và dùng danh từ số nhiều sai (informations → information). Nên giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và thêm ví dụ, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Hạn chế lặp từ như 'many' quá nhiều lần.

예시: I prefer chatting in a group because different people share various tips and perspectives. For instance, in a group study session, someone might suggest a grammar trick while another recommends a speaking routine.

제안: Cần diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn (avoid 'social media can call video chat'), sửa ngữ pháp và cụm từ (send the voice → send voice messages). Nên nêu rõ vì sao tiện lợi và khi nào bạn vẫn chọn gặp trực tiếp. Dùng một hoặc hai câu bổ trợ với liên từ.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it allows video calls and voice messages instantly. However, I still meet face-to-face for important conversations or when I want a more personal connection.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi cấu trúc (I and my friend → my friend and I; don't have general opinion → disagree). Cần trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích cách giải quyết xung đột cụ thể. Tránh câu mơ hồ và thêm ví dụ về một tình huống nhỏ.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue when we disagree on something. When that happens, my friend and I calmly discuss our points of view and try to find a compromise, such as agreeing to disagree or testing both ideas.

× My friend is always listen me.

✓ My friend is always listening to me.

The verb 'listen' requires the -ing form after 'always' when indicating a repeated action with auxiliary 'be' implied; also 'listen' takes the preposition 'to' before the object. Use 'is listening to me' for present continuous or habitual annoyance: 'My friend is always listening to me.'

× I see chair many things, many information.

✓ I see/learn many things and get a lot of information.

The original sentence uses 'see chair' which is incorrect; likely intended 'see/learn'. 'Information' is uncountable so use 'a lot of information' or omit quantifier. Provide clearer verb choice such as 'learn' or 'see' depending on meaning.

× I usually chat about with friend uh, about the love and uh the study in IELTS and uh share ideas together.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about love and studying for the IELTS and share ideas together.

Do not use both 'about' and 'with' together; correct phrase is 'chat with someone about something'. Use plural 'friends' or 'my friend(s)' and use 'studying for the IELTS' to express purpose.

× I usually chat about with friend uh, about the love and uh the study in IELTS and uh share ideas together.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about love and studying for the IELTS and share ideas together.

Use plural 'friends' or include determiner 'my' before 'friend'. Also 'ideas' is fine but ensure subject-verb agreement and plural form for consistency.

× Many people will share many tips, many informations, many ideas, and each idea also bring each style.

✓ Many people share many tips, a lot of information, and many ideas, and each idea also brings a different style.

Use 'a lot of information' because 'information' is uncountable; 'informations' is incorrect. Use 'brings' for third person singular and add 'different' to clarify meaning.

× Many people will share many tips, many informations, many ideas, and each idea also bring each style.

✓ Many people share many tips, a lot of information, and many ideas, and each idea also brings its own style.

Use 'brings' for 'each idea' (third person singular). Also 'its own style' is a natural phrase.

× I prefer to communicate via social media because social media can call video chat and send the voice very fluently without face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because social media can be used for video calls and voice messages, and it is more fluent than face-to-face communication.

Use 'video calls' or 'make video calls' and 'voice messages' rather than 'send the voice'. 'Face to face' should be 'face-to-face' or 'face-to-face communication'. Rephrase for naturalness.

× I prefer to communicate via social media because social media can call video chat and send the voice very fluently without face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I can make video calls and send voice messages more easily than meeting face-to-face.

Restructure sentence to subject 'I' performing actions 'make' and 'send'. 'More easily than meeting face-to-face' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Of course, when I and my friend don't have general opinion, my and my friend will talk about together about my.

✓ Of course, when my friend and I do not have the same opinion, we talk about it together.

Correct word order is 'my friend and I'. Use 'do not have the same opinion' rather than 'don't have general opinion'. Replace redundant 'about together about my' with 'talk about it together'. Use 'we' as subject for both people.

× Of course, when I and my friend don't have general opinion, my and my friend will talk about together about my.

✓ Of course, when my friend and I do not have the same opinion, we discuss it together.

Use pronoun 'we' to refer to both speakers. 'Discuss it together' is a concise and correct phrase. Avoid repeating 'my and my friend'. Use 'the same opinion' for clarity.