Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and long confusing phrases, and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Also correct tense/grammar (e.g., "since I was in primary school").

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I'm outgoing. For example, I have been friends with some classmates since primary school, and we often reminisce about the adventures we had together.

제안: Be specific and organize your answer: give a topic sentence then one or two clear examples linked logically. Avoid vague phrases and repetition (e.g., "we have similar interests about how we like reading our books").

예시: We usually talk about books and their film adaptations. For instance, we enjoy discussing characters from fantasy novels like Prince Caspian and comparing how they are portrayed in the movies.

제안: Clarify your preference and avoid contradictory statements. Start with a clear opinion, then give a reason with a linking word. Keep it short and accurate (e.g., explain whether groups energize or tire you).

예시: I prefer chatting in a small group because I enjoy hearing different opinions. For example, in group conversations I usually listen more and learn new ideas, which I find stimulating rather than tiring.

제안: Good clear preference; tighten language and fix minor grammar. Use a linking phrase to add one specific reason and keep it to two sentences max.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions. This helps me understand sensitive topics more clearly than via social media.

제안: Give a direct, confident response and one clear reason or example. Avoid repeating phrases and vague self-descriptions. Correct grammar (e.g., "I'm not an argumentative person").

예시: No, I'm not an argumentative person because I prefer to resolve disagreements calmly. For example, if a friend and I disagree, I usually listen and try to find a compromise rather than argue.

× Yes, I do love chatting with friends because I'm a very outgoing person and I like going out with my friends and I have my friends since I had AI was going to a primary school and I love them very much and we had so many adventures together and I like chatting about it with them.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with friends because I'm a very outgoing person, I like going out with them, and I have had my friends since I was in primary school; I love them very much, we had so many adventures together, and I like talking about them.

Multiple errors: tense and verb form issues (Grammar IDs 5 and 6), pronoun and referent problems (ID 12), and sentence structure/run-on (ID 26). 'I do love' is unnecessary emphasis; 'I have my friends since I had AI was going to a primary school' is ungrammatical — correct: 'I have had my friends since I was in primary school' (present perfect to show continuing state). 'Chatting about it with them' should match plural noun 'adventures' so use 'talking about them'. Also split long run-on sentence into clearer clauses or use punctuation to improve readability.

× We usually chat about books and book characters because we have so many similar interests about how we like reading our books and watching their movies.

✓ We usually chat about books and book characters because we have similar interests in reading and in watching their film adaptations.

Past tense issue partly and incorrect preposition/phrase (ID 11). 'We have so many similar interests about how we like reading our books' is awkward; use 'have similar interests in reading'. 'Watching their movies' is better expressed as 'watching their film adaptations'. No past tense required; original used present correctly.

× We both love watching fantastic movies and we love Prince Caspian.

✓ We both love watching fantasy movies, and we love Prince Caspian.

Pronoun/adjective use (ID 13) and word choice: 'fantastic' often means excellent, but 'fantasy' is the genre likely intended. Use 'fantasy movies' for clarity. Grammar otherwise fine.

× I like chatting with a group of people because I don't like chatting that much.

✓ I prefer chatting in a small group rather than one-on-one because long conversations exhaust me.

Present tense/wording issue (ID 6) and sentence contradiction/clarity (ID 26). The original contradicts itself: saying they like group chatting but then 'I don't like chatting that much'. Clarify preference and reason. Use present simple for habitual preference.

× It makes me feel exhausted.

✓ It makes me feel exhausted.

Adverb placement (ID 20): sentence is correct; no change needed. Included for completeness.

× Then I prefer listening what they're chatting about.

✓ Then I prefer listening to what they're talking about.

Sentence structure error (ID 26) and incorrect verb/preposition (ID 11). Use 'listening to' plus 'talking about' (more natural than 'chatting about' after 'listening to').

× That's how I love being an outgoing person.

✓ That's part of how I enjoy being an outgoing person.

Present tense/wording issue (ID 6) and awkward phrasing (ID 26). 'That's how I love being' is unnatural; use 'That's part of how I enjoy being' to express reason and maintain present simple.

× I like chatting to face to face because I like to see the facial expressions of the people I'm chatting with because it's makes so much difference when you're chatting in private topics and it makes understanding things very clearly.

✓ I like chatting face-to-face because I can see the facial expressions of the people I'm talking with; that makes a big difference when discussing private topics and helps me understand things more clearly.

Preposition/use of form errors (ID 11), verb form (ID 13), adverb placement (ID 20) and sentence structure (ID 26). 'chatting to face to face' should be 'chatting face-to-face' (hyphenated adjective/adverbial phrase). Remove extra 'because' repetition and change 'it's makes' to 'that makes' or 'it makes' (avoid 'it's makes'). 'Chatting in private topics' -> 'discussing private topics'. Use 'helps me understand things more clearly' for natural adverb placement.

× No, I'm not on that type of angry person.

✓ No, I'm not that kind of angry person.

Incorrect use of pronouns/expressions (ID 12) and article/type phrasing (ID 22). 'On that type of' is incorrect; use 'that kind of' or 'that type of'. Also 'angry person' collocates with 'that kind of'.

× I actually hate arguing because I like being OK with my what my friend says.

✓ I actually hate arguing because I like being okay with what my friends say.

Sentence structure errors (ID 26) and incorrect pronoun/order (ID 12). 'my what my friend says' is ungrammatical; correct to 'what my friends say' or 'what my friend says' depending on singular/plural. Use 'okay' instead of 'OK' for consistency.

× Yeah, I I am a kind and nice person who doesn't like arguing because I think that's so rude and mean.

✓ Yes, I am a kind and pleasant person who doesn't like arguing because I think it's rude and mean.

Sentence structure/word choice (ID 26 and 13). Remove repeated 'I'. 'Nice' and 'kind' are redundant; 'pleasant' or keep one adjective. Use contraction consistently: 'it's' instead of 'that's' for clarity. Overall simplify to avoid redundancy.