Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid filler words and contractions like 'nah' in formal test; use 'No' or 'Not really'.

예시: Not really. I prefer talking to friends in person because I find typing on my phone time-consuming, and I often miss messages when I'm busy. For example, during exam periods I like quick face-to-face chats to clarify study plans.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence then organize supporting details using linking words (for example, 'mainly about... and...'). Be specific about topics and include one example to illustrate.

예시: Mostly about our studies. For instance, we discuss lecture topics, upcoming exams and which units need more revision. Last week we planned who would summarize each chapter before the midterm.

제안: Answer directly and clearly, use a linking word to explain reasons, correct grammar (singular/plural), and avoid hesitations. Provide a concise example of why one-on-one is better for you.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because it feels more personal and I get quicker replies. For example, when I ask about study plans one friend responds quickly, while group chats are noisy and confusing.

제안: Give a direct statement then give two clear reasons with linking words (for example, 'because... and because...'). Use accurate vocabulary ('prefer face-to-face communication') and avoid vague phrases like 'communication scale.'

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's more personal and I can read body language, and also because I'm unwilling to spend time typing on social media. For example, I resolve study issues faster when we talk in person.

제안: Start with a clear answer then explain with specific reasons and an example. Avoid repeating fillers and improve grammar (e.g., 'introverted' and 'I tend to listen rather than argue').

예시: Not usually. I'm quite introverted, so I tend to listen and avoid confrontations; if I disagree I prefer to discuss it calmly later. For instance, when a friend made a wrong claim about an assignment, I asked questions privately instead of arguing in public.

× Nah, I prefer talking in person rather than chatting online because I'm a little bit lazy to type it on the phone.

✓ Nah, I prefer talking in person rather than chatting online because I'm a little lazy to type on the phone.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and unnatural after 'type'. Remove 'it' and use 'a little lazy' (not 'a little bit lazy to') to sound natural. Also 'a little' is sufficient. Suggestion: say 'a little lazy to type on the phone' or 'a little lazy to type messages on my phone.'

× And yeah, I'm a little bit busy to watch the other messages.

✓ And yeah, I'm a little busy to read other messages.

The verb 'busy' usually takes 'with' or is followed by an infinitive like 'too busy to'. 'Busy to watch' is incorrect. Use 'a little busy' and the verb 'read' rather than 'watch' for messages. Better: 'too busy to read other messages.'

× I re recently chat with my university friends so I'm mostly chat for my study and for the lesson and for the examination.

✓ I recently chatted with my university friends, so I mostly chat about my studies, lessons, and examinations.

There are multiple tense and verb-form issues: 're' is extraneous, use 'recently chatted' or 'have recently been chatting'. 'Chat' needs the preposition 'about'. Use plural 'studies' and parallel nouns. Suggestion: 'I have recently been chatting with my university friends, so I mostly chat about my studies, lessons, and exams.'

× What should we study and focus?

✓ What should we study and focus on?

The verb 'focus' typically requires the preposition 'on' when followed by the object. Add 'on' to make the sentence grammatical: 'focus on what.'

× Which lesson should we focus most and like this?

✓ Which lesson should we focus on the most?

Use 'on' after 'focus' and place 'the most' after the verb phrase. 'Like this' is unnecessary and unclear, so remove it. Better: 'Which lesson should we focus on the most?'

× I prefer only one friends because umm in good shape when I'm type it.

✓ I prefer only one friend because I'm better when I type to one person.

'One friends' mixes singular and plural; use singular 'friend'. 'In good shape' is idiomatic for physical condition; use 'better' to express preference. 'When I'm type it' is ungrammatical; use 'when I type to one person.'

× Uh, but a lot of people, a lot of friends seen on to my messages but they don't reply.

✓ But a lot of people, a lot of friends, see my messages but they don't reply.

'Seen on to' is incorrect. Use present tense 'see my messages' for habitual action. Remove extra prepositions. Also add commas for clarity. Alternatively: 'many friends see my messages but don't reply.'

× So oh direct you my only one friend so they can reply to me.

✓ So I direct my message to only one friend so they can reply to me.

Sentence lacks a clear subject and uses incorrect word order. 'Direct you my only one friend' is ungrammatical. Use 'direct my message to only one friend.' Using singular 'friend' then 'they' as singular 'they' is acceptable here; or use 'he or she' if needed.

× I do prefer communicate face to face because it is very close to me and umm for me.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more natural to me.

'Do prefer communicate' lacks 'to' before the verb: 'prefer to communicate'. 'It is very close to me and for me' is awkward; use 'feels more natural to me.' Suggestion: 'I prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more natural.'

× I'm very lazy to chat and type with online so I prefer face to face it also to get communication scale.

✓ I'm very lazy to chat and type online, so I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows better interaction.

'Type with online' is incorrect; use 'type online'. 'Face to face it also to get communication scale' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'face-to-face communication' and a clear reason like 'allows better interaction.' Use hyphens in 'face-to-face' when used as adjective.

× No, I don't argue with my friend really umm because I'm introverted person so I only listen to what they said.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends, really, because I'm an introverted person, so I only listen to what they say.

Use plural 'friends' for consistency or keep 'friend' with appropriate article. Missing article before 'introverted person' -> 'an introverted person'. 'What they said' mixes past tense; use present 'say' for habitual action. Also add commas for clarity.

× If they wrong I'm just listen.

✓ If they are wrong, I just listen.

'If they wrong' needs the verb 'are' to be grammatically correct. 'I'm just listen' is incorrect: use 'I just listen.' Ensure proper subject-verb structure.

× I don't umm talk uh against to the other.

✓ I don't argue with others.

'Talk against to the other' is ungrammatical. Use 'argue with others' or 'speak against someone.' 'Others' is more natural here. Keep simple: 'I don't argue with others.'