Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Trả lời thiếu rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không tự nhiên. Cần trả lời trực tiếp vào câu hỏi bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm 1-2 câu chi tiết cụ thể. Chú ý dùng thì phù hợp (thường/hiện tại tiếp diễn), loại bỏ từ thừa và sửa cấu trúc câu (ví dụ: “I chat with my friends a lot in the summer because I’m free from school”).

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. During the summer I often meet them at home and we talk about our plans and daily life. It helps me relax and stay connected.

제안: Nội dung hợp lý nhưng diễn đạt lủng củng, nhiều tiếng ấp úng và lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ 'screw through'). Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích cụ thể chủ đề trò chuyện, dùng từ vựng phù hợp như 'scroll' hoặc 'share'. Giữ câu ngắn, dùng liên từ khi cần.

예시: We usually talk about social media trends and videos we saw on TikTok. For example, we often scroll through TikTok together and share funny or interesting clips, then discuss them.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ý, thiếu câu chủ đề và chi tiết cụ thể. Có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Nên nêu rõ sở thích (group or one-to-one) rồi giải thích lý do với ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh ấp úng và câu không hoàn chỉnh.

예시: I prefer chatting in a small group because I enjoy the lively conversation and different viewpoints. For example, when we meet at a cafe, each person shares stories and we laugh together.

제안: Ý trả lời rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ 'interest conversation', lặp từ, câu chưa hoàn chỉnh). Cần dùng cấu trúc đầy đủ: chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ. Dùng từ vựng chính xác như 'interesting conversations' hoặc 'personal topics'.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and natural. We often meet at a cafe and have interesting conversations about our daily lives, which helps us understand each other better.

제안: Câu trả lời mơ hồ và mắc nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên trả lời trực tiếp (có/không; or ‘sometimes’) rồi giải thích khi nào gây tranh luận và kết luận ý kiến về tình bạn. Sử dụng động từ đúng (e.g. 'have an argument') và tránh từ thừa.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but usually over small things like misunderstandings. I believe that having arguments can strengthen a real friendship if we talk honestly and resolve the issue.

× Well I traveled with my friends every day because the this time is summer so I don't have to go to school. Umm it's mean I can make my friends so my often talk with them at home.

✓ Well I travel with my friends every day because this time is summer so I don't have to go to school. It means I can meet my friends so I often talk with them at home.

The student used past tense 'traveled' but describes a habitual present activity during the summer, so present simple 'travel' is correct. 'the this time' is incorrect word order and extra article; use 'this time'. 'it's mean' is incorrect; use 'it means'. 'make my friends' is wrong collocation; use 'meet my friends'. Word order 'my often talk' is incorrect; correct is 'I often talk'. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual actions, check subject-verb order, use correct collocations (meet friends), and remove extra articles.

× You know, in this day and age, uh, Tiktok is a very popular uh, app, so is also convenient it we cannot screw through the TikTok and share it for my friends.

✓ You know, in this day and age, TikTok is a very popular app, and it is also convenient; we can scroll through TikTok and share things with my friends.

Pronoun and word order errors: 'so is also convenient it' misplaces subject 'it' and auxiliary. 'cannot screw through' is incorrect verb choice and modal; correct is 'we can scroll through'. 'share it for my friends' uses wrong preposition and object; use 'share things with my friends'. Suggestions: place pronouns before verbs ('it is'), use correct verbs ('scroll'), and use 'share ... with'.

× That's a great people because my friends, umm, I have a group of friends and we talk, uh, together is really should table. So, uh, even time we talk together we have.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because I have a group of friends and we talk together often. When we talk together we have a good time.

Original has fragmented and illogical clauses: 'That's a great people' mixes singular/plural and incorrect structure. 'together is really should table' is unintelligible. 'even time we talk together we have' is incomplete. Suggestions: make clear subject and verb, use 'prefer chatting with a group' to answer question, use 'often' or 'have a good time' to express frequency and result.

× Absolutely communicate face to face because I often hang out with my friends. We go to the cafe and have some interest conversation about our daily lives. Sometime we talk about each other's lives and it's man, it's the.

✓ I absolutely prefer to communicate face to face because I often hang out with my friends. We go to a cafe and have interesting conversations about our daily lives. Sometimes we talk about each other's lives and it's nice.

Errors include missing verb 'prefer', article use 'the cafe' vs 'a cafe' (either possible but 'a cafe' fits general statement), 'interest conversation' should be adjective 'interesting' and plural 'conversations', 'Sometime' needs plural 'Sometimes', and final fragment 'it's man, it's the' is unclear; use 'it's nice'. Suggestions: include main verb ('prefer'), use correct adjective forms, pluralize when appropriate, and choose a clear ending phrase.

× I think anyone is have one time, uh, argue with their friend, umm, maybe a small thing or big large thing because but I think it's a real friend when we cannot thinking mindlessly, uh.

✓ I think everyone has argued with a friend at least once, maybe over a small or big issue. But I think someone is a real friend when we don't think mindlessly.

Tense and pronoun errors: 'anyone is have one time' should be 'everyone has argued at least once' using present perfect to indicate experience. 'big large thing' is redundant; use 'big issue'. 'we cannot thinking mindlessly' mixes modal/verb forms; use 'we don't think mindlessly'. Suggestions: use 'everyone' for general statements, choose appropriate tense (present perfect for life experiences), avoid redundant adjectives, and use correct negation with base verb form.