Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Говорите более грамотно и последовательно: используйте правильные времена и согласование (например, "I chat with them every day"). Сократите повторы и стройте предложения яснее (одно-два предложения достаточно). Добавьте связующее предложение с указанием типа отношений и примера.

예시: Yes, I do. I chat with my friends every day, and we often talk about our daily activities. For example, my closest friends are Una, Vanya and Ira, and we usually message each other in the evening.

제안: Исправьте формы глаголов и сделайте конкретнее: используйте связки (for example, such as, and) и конкретные темы. Избегайте неопределённых слов ("advantages") — лучше назвать конкретные вопросы, например, встречи, учёба, планы.

예시: We talk about many things, but mainly about our studies and practical plans. For example, we discuss assignments, decide where to meet for group work, and share tips for exams.

제안: Уточните временные рамки и используйте правильную структуру: contrast (formerly/now) with linking words (but, because). Объясните причину предпочтения коротко и конкретно.

예시: I used to prefer chatting in groups, but now I prefer one-on-one conversations. I find talking to a close friend more comfortable because we can be more honest and focused.

제안: Ответ ясен, но можно добавить конкретную причину и пример, используя связующее слово (because, so). Избегайте повторов слов "communicate" и "chat"; используйте синонимы.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to read body language and build trust. For instance, I feel conversations are clearer when we meet in person rather than texting.

제안: Используйте корректную грамматику (everyone argues) и расширьте мысль: почему это нормально, как вы решаете конфликты. Добавьте связку cause/result и короткий пример.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, which I think is normal because disagreements happen. For example, when we disagree about plans, we usually talk it through and find a compromise.

× Moreover, I chatting with them every day.

✓ Moreover, I chat with them every day.

The original sentence uses 'chatting' without an auxiliary verb, which is incorrect for simple present. Use the base verb with appropriate present tense: 'I chat' to indicate a habitual action. Suggestion: use simple present for routines. Grammar problem type ID:8

× By the way, I have many friends such as my best friends, her name is Una, my best friends Vanya and Ira.

✓ By the way, I have many friends; my best friends are Una, Vanya and Ira.

The sentence mixes singular pronoun 'her' and repeats 'my best friends' with incorrect clause structure. Use plural verb 'are' for plural subject and list names separated by commas. Remove 'her name is' and use a single clear clause. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Well, we have a lot to talk about, but we usually chatting about studying or advantages for example, we decide where we meeting for the working et cetera.

✓ Well, we have a lot to talk about, but we usually chat about studying or advantages; for example, we decide where we will meet for work, etc.

'Usually chatting' is incorrect without auxiliary — use simple present 'usually chat' for habitual actions. 'Decide where we meeting' is incorrect: use future 'will meet' or present 'we meet' depending on context; 'for work' is more natural than 'for the working'. Also separate ideas with punctuation. Grammar problem type ID:8

× we decide where we meeting for the working et cetera.

✓ we decide where we will meet for work.

'We meeting' is incorrect form; with 'we' use base verb and auxiliary for future: 'we will meet' or present 'we meet'. 'The working' is ungrammatical; use 'work'. Choose 'will meet' to show future arrangements. Grammar problem type ID:2

× Early I prefer to chat with a group of people, but now I'd prefer to have one.

✓ Originally I preferred to chat with a group of people, but now I'd prefer to have one.

'Early' is the wrong word; use 'Originally' or 'Earlier'. Also maintain tense consistency: 'I preferred' for past preference and 'now I'd prefer' for current preference. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Best friends which will be you as a sister or brother.

✓ My best friend would be like a sister or brother to me.

The clause is ungrammatical. Use possessive 'My best friend' and correct relative structure. 'Which' is incorrect for people; use 'who' or restructure. 'Would be like a sister or brother to me' expresses the intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Personally, I don't like to communicate via social media because I prefer to communicate and chat face to face.

✓ Personally, I don't like to communicate via social media because I prefer to communicate and chat face-to-face.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb/adjective. Also consistent use of 'via' is acceptable. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Of course I argue with my friends, and moreover, I think that everybody argue with their friends.

✓ Of course I argue with my friends, and moreover, I think that everybody argues with their friends.

'Everybody' is singular and requires singular verb form 'argues'. Use 'everybody argues' to agree with the singular indefinite pronoun. Grammar problem type ID:27