Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak in complete, grammatically correct sentences; keep it concise and relevant. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear words or invented phrases. Use linking words (for example, 'and' or 'because') correctly and check vocabulary (e.g. 'status' instead of 'statue').

예시: Yes, I do. I often chat with my friends to update each other about our lives, such as work and family news. For example, last week we shared plans for an upcoming holiday, which helped me feel more connected.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific, relevant details. Avoid incorrect or unclear words ('looting life', 'day away'). Use linking words like 'and' or 'for example' to organize points. Limit your answer to up to 4–5 sentences and be precise about topics.

예시: We usually talk about work and daily life. For instance, I tell them about projects at work and they tell me about family events or hobbies. We also share quick updates about plans for the weekend.

제안: Begin with a direct answer, then explain with one clear reason and an example. Correct awkward phrases ('Is depend', 'pirate') and use linking words ('because', 'but'). Keep it natural and concise.

예시: It depends on the topic. If it's a casual update about daily life, I prefer a group chat because everyone can join in. But if it's a personal or serious matter, I choose to speak one-on-one because it's more private.

제안: State your preference clearly, then give a concise reason and acknowledge exceptions. Fix grammar ('face-to-face', 'we are busy with responsibilities') and avoid trailing sentences. Use connectors like 'however' to show contrast.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's more enjoyable and you can read body language. However, because we are often busy with work, we sometimes use social media or messages to stay in touch.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct words ('we get along', 'friends' instead of 'fans') and give a short specific example if mentioning past behaviour. Keep to two or three sentences maximum and use linking words like 'but' correctly.

예시: No, I don't usually argue with my friends because we get along and respect each other's opinions. When I was younger, I had a few disagreements about small things, like where to go on weekends, but they were never serious.

× Yes sure I always chatting with my friends to update many things in my life and also her life and I think chatting with Fen is can reduce my statue and also can help me up to date.

✓ Yes, sure. I am always chatting with my friends to update many things in my life and also in theirs, and I think chatting with friends can reduce my stress and also help me stay up to date.

The original sentence misuses verb forms and gerunds. 'I always chatting' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' with the present continuous: 'I am always chatting' (Rule: use be + -ing). 'Her life' should be 'theirs' to match plural 'friends' (pronoun agreement). 'Chatting with Fen is can' mixes modal and finite verb; remove 'is' so 'chatting with friends can reduce...'. 'Statue' is a wrong word choice; likely 'stress'. Also use 'help me stay up to date' for correct verb construction. Suggestions: include correct auxiliary verbs for continuous tenses, match pronouns to their antecedents, avoid redundant verbs like 'is can', and choose appropriate vocabulary.

× I usually chat with friends about my job and my looting life and also day away update their life because all we always update each other.

✓ I usually chat with friends about my job and my personal life and also about updates in their lives because we always update each other.

Prepositions are missing or incorrect. 'Looting life' is wrong word choice; use 'personal life'. Add 'about' before 'updates' and use 'in their lives' (preposition 'in' + plural noun). Also 'all we always' has wrong word order; 'we always' is correct. Suggestions: ensure correct prepositions such as 'about' and 'in', use clearer vocabulary, and place adverbs like 'always' before the verb.

× Is depend on story that I want to talk with my friends.

✓ It depends on the story I want to talk about with my friends.

The sentence lacks a proper subject and has incorrect word order. 'Is depend' should be 'It depends' (subject + verb). 'Talk with my friends' needs 'talk about' to indicate the topic. Suggestions: include the dummy subject 'it' for impersonal expressions and use correct verb forms and prepositions ('talk about').

× If it's a normal story like like common story daily life I prefer to share in a group.

✓ If it's a normal, everyday story about daily life, I prefer to share it in a group.

The phrase 'like like common story daily life' is repetitive and awkward. Use adjectives in correct order: 'normal, everyday' modifies 'story'. Add 'about' before 'daily life' and include object 'it' after 'share'. Suggestions: avoid repetition, order adjectives naturally, and include necessary objects for verbs like 'share'.

× But if the story is quite pirate or I want us to tell the someone I prefer to talk with one.

✓ But if the story is quite private or if I want to tell someone something personally, I prefer to talk with one friend.

'Pirate' is a wrong word choice for 'private'. The clause 'I want us to tell the someone' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I want to tell someone something personally'. 'Talk with one' should be 'talk with one friend'. Suggestions: choose correct vocabulary ('private'), simplify clauses, and specify the object (friend).

× I prefer to communicate with my friend with face to face because it's more enjoyable and more fun.

✓ I prefer to communicate with my friends face to face because it's more enjoyable and more fun.

Use plural 'friends' to match general meaning. 'With face to face' should be 'face to face' (no 'with'). 'Prefer to communicate' is fine but ensure correct collocation 'communicate with someone face to face'. Suggestions: remove redundant prepositions and match noun number to meaning.

× But nowadays we have more or less responsibility so we have to take the response and we have a job so we don't have time to.

✓ But nowadays we have more responsibilities, so we have to respond and, because we have jobs, we don't have time to meet in person often.

Original sentence has unclear phrases and missing objects. 'More or less responsibility' should be 'more responsibilities'. 'Take the response' is unidiomatic; use 'respond' or 'reply'. The final clause 'we don't have time to' is incomplete; add 'meet in person often' or similar. Suggestions: use plural nouns for countable items, choose idiomatic verbs ('respond'), and complete clauses with necessary objects.

× No, not at all, because I think we go up and also we have reasonable, so we don't have any issue to argue with fans.

✓ No, not at all, because I think we get along and we are reasonable, so we don't have any issues arguing with friends.

Pronoun and vocabulary errors: 'go up' is incorrect for 'get along'. 'We have reasonable' needs 'we are reasonable'. 'Issue to argue with fans' uses wrong nouns—'fans' should be 'friends' and 'issues arguing with' is the correct collocation. Suggestions: use correct phrasal verbs ('get along'), appropriate adjectives ('reasonable'), and correct nouns for the context.

× But when I was young I always have some agreement with fans about UMM.

✓ But when I was young I always had some disagreements with friends about small things.

Tense inconsistency: 'when I was young' requires past tense 'had' not present 'have'. 'Agreement' likely should be 'disagreement' given context of arguing. 'Fans' should be 'friends'. 'UMM' is unclear; replace with 'small things' or 'trivial matters' if meaning is minor arguments. Suggestions: keep past-tense verbs in past-time clauses, use correct antonyms if context implies disagreement, and choose clear vocabulary.