Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 発音と文法の誤り（現在形の省略や進行形の誤用）を直し、より自然で簡潔な表現にしてください。また、トピック文の後に具体例を一つ加えると説得力が増します。例えば、どんな話題でリラックスできるかを一文で述べましょう。

예시: Yes, I do. I usually chat with my friends when we meet because it helps me relax. For example, we often talk about our weekend plans, which always makes me feel happy.

제안: 語彙の選び方と明瞭さを改善してください（“plan of life”や不明確な語“prong”を避ける）。構造はトピック文＋具体例の順で、接続詞（and, also, for example）を使って論理的につなぎましょう。

예시: I usually talk about work and my future plans. For example, I tell my friends about career goals and we exchange advice, which I find very helpful.

제안: 全体の流れは良いですが、文法（主語と動詞の一致、時制）と発音の曖昧さを修正してください。理由をもう少し具体的に述べ、接続語（for example, because）を明確に使いましょう。

예시: I prefer talking one-on-one because I can focus on the other person. For example, if a friend shares a problem, I can listen carefully and offer specific advice.

제안: 表現の明確さと文法を改善してください。意味が不明瞭な部分（"looks like third"や"I'm barely take care of her"）を避け、顔の表情を理由に挙げるなら具体的な効果（理解や共感が深まる）を示しましょう。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions and body language. For example, if a friend seems upset, I can notice it immediately and comfort them.

제안: 正直な答えは良いですが、理由の説明をより自然にし、受動的に意見を変えると聞こえないようにしましょう。代わりにどう対処するか（agree to disagree, discuss calmly）を示すと説得力が増します。

예시: No, I usually avoid arguing because I dislike conflict. If we disagree, I prefer to discuss calmly and try to understand their point of view, or agree to disagree.

× Yes, I always chatting with my friends when I meet them because it is very enjoyable and I can feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I am always chatting with my friends when I meet them because it is very enjoyable and I can feel relaxed.

The student omitted the auxiliary verb 'am' before the present participle 'chatting'. When using the present continuous tense with first person singular, the correct form is 'I am chatting'. Suggestion: include the appropriate form of 'be' (am/is/are) before the verb + -ing to form present continuous. Note: Alternatively, for habitual actions, 'I always chat with my friends when I meet them' (simple present) is also natural; choose present continuous for ongoing repeated actions or simple present for habitual actions.

× I usually chat about uh, my work and my plan of life.

✓ I usually chat about, uh, my work and my life plans.

'Plan of life' is an unnatural prepositional phrase in English. The correct noun phrase is 'life plans' or 'plans for my life'. Also word order is adjusted for naturalness. Suggestion: use 'life plans' or 'plans for my life' instead of 'plan of life'.

× It is very interesting and I hear about my friends, uh, like prong.

✓ It is very interesting and I hear about my friends, uh, like 'prong'.

The sentence appears to have a pronunciation or word choice issue ('prong') but grammatically 'hear about my friends' is correct. To preserve the original word, it should be set off with quotes or clarified. Suggestion: replace unclear word with a clear noun or omit it. If intending 'problems', correct to 'problems': 'I hear about my friends' problems.'

× It is also very fun.

✓ It is also a lot of fun.

'Very fun' is informally acceptable but 'a lot of fun' or 'very enjoyable' is more natural. Here adding the article and using 'fun' as a noun improves correctness. Suggestion: use 'a lot of fun' or 'very enjoyable.'

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I can focus on her, uh, speaking.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I can focus on her speaking.

The phrase 'her speaking' is awkward; grammatically the verb form is fine but natural phrasing is 'her speaking' or better 'what she is saying' or 'her when she is speaking.' Suggestion: use 'focus on her speaking' or 'focus on what she is saying.'

× For example, if she talk about her problem, I can hear her and give advice.

✓ For example, if she talks about her problem, I can listen to her and give advice.

The verb 'talk' must agree with the third person singular subject 'she', so use 'talks'. Also 'hear her' is not the best collocation for attentive listening; use 'listen to her'. Suggestion: use third person singular '-s' and prefer 'listen to' for active listening.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I can notice their facial expression.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can notice their facial expressions.

The plural 'expressions' is more natural when referring generally to people's facial expressions. Also 'notice' is acceptable but 'read' or 'see' can be more natural. Suggestion: use 'facial expressions' (plural) or rephrase to 'notice their facial expressions.'

× For example, if I we talk about the problem, if she uh, looks like third, I'm barely take care of her.

✓ For example, if we talk about a problem and she looks upset, I'm able to take care of her.

The original sentence has multiple errors: accidental 'I we' (extra pronoun), awkward phrase 'looks like third' (likely intended 'looks sad' or 'looks distressed'), and incorrect 'I'm barely take care of her' which mixes modal/auxiliary forms. 'I'm able to take care of her' or 'I can take care of her' is correct. Suggestion: remove duplicate pronoun, use appropriate adjective ('upset' or 'sad'), and use correct auxiliary verb + base verb ('can take' or 'am able to take').

× No I don't because I don't like conflict so if my opinion is different from my friend I change my mind.

✓ No, I don't because I don't like conflict, so if my opinion is different from my friend's I will change my mind.

Possessive apostrophe missing in 'my friend's'. Also the sequence of ideas about future action is better expressed with 'will' for the resulting action. Suggestion: add apostrophe for possessive and use 'will change' or 'usually change' depending on intended meaning. If meaning habitually change, 'I usually change my mind' is also correct.