Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler, and use correct grammar (e.g., ask about how they are doing). Keep to 1–2 sentences and include a brief reason or example.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me keep up with their lives and support them. For example, I often ask how they are doing and what they have been up to recently.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases and use varied vocabulary (e.g., reminisce, daily routines, plans).

예시: We usually talk about our daily lives and recent events, and sometimes we reminisce about shared memories. For instance, we discuss work or school routines and remember a funny trip we took together last year.

제안: State your preference clearly, then give concise reasons with linking words. Remove fillers and repetitions. Use specific examples to illustrate differences between group and one-to-one chats.

예시: I prefer chatting in a group because we can cover many topics quickly and share jokes or memes. For example, in a group chat we often discuss new TV shows and plan meetups, which is faster than messaging one person at a time.

제안: Give a balanced answer with a clear topic sentence and specific reasons for each option. Use linking words like "however" or "also" and correct grammar (e.g., 'face-to-face' and 'via social media').

예시: I prefer both face-to-face and social media communication. Face-to-face conversations allow me to read body language, while social media and video calls are convenient for staying in touch when we are far apart.

제안: Answer directly and explain briefly why, using correct grammar and clearer phrasing. Replace vague words with precise ones and avoid contradictions. Use one linking phrase to develop the idea.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue because disagreements are normal and can actually strengthen friendships if handled respectfully. For example, an argument about plans helped us clarify expectations and improved how we communicate.

× Yes, I love engaging in conversations and friends.

✓ Yes, I love engaging in conversations with friends.

The sentence uses 'and' incorrectly to connect 'conversations' and 'friends'. Use the preposition 'with' to show who you are conversing with. Suggestion: say 'engaging in conversations with friends.'

× I love to know how they how they, how they, they went and I wanna know how are they?

✓ I like to know how they are and how their lives went.

Problems: repeated fragments and incorrect word order for questions. Use a statement word order for indirect questions: 'to know how they are' or 'how their lives went.' Avoid repetitions and use 'like' or 'want' formally instead of 'wanna.'

× Mostly we talk about our daily lives also we talk about the things that we did before and we reminisce all the good, all the good memories that we had.

✓ Mostly we talk about our daily lives, and we talk about things we did before, and we reminisce about the good memories we had.

Mistake: missing preposition 'about' after 'reminisce' and run-on structure. Use 'reminisce about' and add commas or conjunctions to join clauses. Also simplify 'all the good, all the good memories' to 'the good memories.'

× Honestly, I prefer to chat with a group of people because we talk about different, umm, things like random things like memes or like the shows that we watch. And we can and we can, we can catch up with them in a short time.

✓ Honestly, I prefer chatting with a group of people because we talk about different things, like memes or shows we watch, and we can catch up with them in a short time.

Use gerund 'chatting' after 'prefer' for general preference. Remove unnecessary repetitions and fillers. Combine clauses to avoid fragmentary repetition 'we can and we can.'

× Honestly I prefer both because in face to face I can see them clearly and and social media we can talk about them video chats or anything.

✓ Honestly, I prefer both because in face-to-face meetings I can see them clearly, and on social media we can have video chats or other conversations.

Use hyphenated adjective 'face-to-face' and correct prepositions: 'in face-to-face meetings' or 'face-to-face' and 'on social media.' Also correct noun phrase 'video chats' and remove 'talk about them.'

× Yes, because argument between friends is normal and it strengthen our relationships or bands with each other and we cannot you us or we cannot avoid having a argument.

✓ Yes, because arguments between friends are normal and they strengthen our relationships and bonds with each other, so we cannot avoid having an argument.

Multiple issues: plural 'arguments' required, subject-verb agreement 'they strengthen', wrong word 'bands' should be 'bonds', awkward phrase 'we cannot you us' and article 'a argument' should be 'an argument.' Reorganize sentence for clarity and correct grammar.