Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct small grammar mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason. Avoid filler phrases and ensure verb agreement ("most of the time" not "times").

예시: I do enjoy chatting sometimes, but I usually prefer being alone. During weekdays I meet many people at work, so I value quiet time to recharge in the evenings.

제안: Use a clear topic sentence and connect supporting details with linking words. Correct small errors ("a talker" → "a talkative person") and be specific about examples to strengthen content.

예시: I'm not very talkative, but when I do chat I usually discuss stock trading and how certain stocks have been performing recently. I also talk about family news, like birthdays or plans for the weekend.

제안: Avoid repetition and use clearer phrasing. Provide one reason and a brief example to support your preference. Use linking words like "because" or "so" for coherence.

예시: I prefer talking to one friend because group conversations tend to stay superficial. For example, in a one-on-one chat I can discuss personal topics like career goals in more depth.

제안: Be concise and correct minor errors ("social medias" → "social media"). Give a specific advantage of face-to-face communication and contrast briefly with social media using a linking word.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows clearer expression and immediate feedback. Although social media is convenient for quick messages, it lacks the nuance of in-person conversations.

제안: Correct grammar and word choice ("in an emotional way"). Start with a direct answer and support it with a brief example of a typical argument and how you handle it to show maturity.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, but not in an emotional way. For instance, if we disagree about an investment, I explain my reasoning calmly and listen to their points so we can weigh the pros and cons.

× Yeah, sometimes I do, but most of the times I like to stay alone because during weekdays I meet a lot of people in work, so.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I do, but most of the time I like to stay alone because during weekdays I meet a lot of people at work.

'Most of the times' is incorrect; use the singular phrase 'most of the time' (singular/plural issue). Also 'in work' is incorrect preposition use; 'at work' is the correct phrase to indicate being at one's workplace (this corresponds to preposition correction but only the plural issue is required here. Improve by using 'most of the time' and 'at work').

× I'm not much of A talker so I don't have a lot of topics to share with friends, but most of the time I talk about stock trading and recent performances and family stuff.

✓ I'm not much of a talker, so I don't have a lot of topics to share with friends, but most of the time I talk about stock trading, recent performance, and family matters.

'A talker' should be 'a talker' with lowercase a and correct spacing; this is an article/capitalization error (article errors). Also add commas for clarity and change 'performances' to 'performance' or 'recent performance' and 'family stuff' to 'family matters' for formality and clarity. Keep verb tenses as present simple for habitual actions.

× I prefer the latter because when you talk to a group of friends, the conversation nature of the conversation would be rather superficial. I like to go deeper when I talk to a person.

✓ I prefer the latter because when you talk to a group of friends, the nature of the conversation would be rather superficial. I like to go deeper when I talk to one person.

Phrase 'the conversation nature of the conversation' is wordy and incorrect; use 'the nature of the conversation' (article and word order issue). 'A person' is acceptable but 'one person' is clearer in contrast to a group. Maintain conditional/modal nuance with 'would' for hypothetical generalization.

× I prefer to communicate face to face, especially when I have some topics to share or exchange ideas with another friend. Social medias have their upsides but face to face communication are deeper.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face, especially when I have some topics to share or to exchange ideas with a friend. Social media have their upsides, but face-to-face communication is deeper.

'Another friend' is unnecessary; use 'a friend'. 'Social medias' is incorrect plural form; the uncountable term is 'social media' (preposition/pronoun and countability). Also 'face to face communication are' has subject-verb agreement error: 'communication' is singular so use 'is'. Hyphenate 'face-to-face' when used as a compound adjective. Use commas for clarity.

× Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes, but not in a emotional way. I like to exchange ideas and talk about the upsides and downsides of things.

✓ Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes, but not in an emotional way. I like to exchange ideas and talk about the upsides and downsides of things.

'a emotional' is incorrect article use before a vowel sound; use 'an emotional'. This is an article problem. The rest of the sentence is correct; keep present simple for habitual actions.