Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 总体表达自然，但可更直接并避免冗余。应先给出简短的主题句，再用一两句具体细节支持，注意句子简洁与连贯性。例如删去重复短语并使用连接词衔接观点与例子。

예시: Yes, I do. Chatting with my friends helps me relax after a busy day. For instance, we usually meet for coffee once a week to catch up on each other's lives and share the latest news.

제안: 回答有思路但语句略显重复且有语法或口误（"It it"）。建议先给出总述，然后用连词细分不同时间的内容，并提供更具体的例子或细节。注意去掉不必要的词汇。

예시: It depends on the time of week. During weekdays we usually talk about work—deadlines, meetings and plans for projects—whereas on weekends we share family news or personal matters over lunch or coffee.

제안: 内容清晰但存在语法错误（如动词单复数、冠词使用）。建议先明确偏好，随后用连接词解释原因并举例。可以用更地道的表达如 "I prefer group conversations because..." 并注意主谓一致。

예시: I usually prefer chatting in a group because there are more stories and different perspectives, especially about work updates. However, when I'm alone with one friend, we tend to discuss personal or family matters.

제안: 表达意图明确但句子结构有些混乱和非地道短语（如 "communicate with social media"、"see how are you"）。建议使用更自然的搭配（"use social media"、"see how someone is"），并将原因和举例分成清晰句子。

예시: I prefer using social media because I study far from my family and it's hard to meet in person. I often make video calls to share news and to see how they're doing.

제안: 回答礼貌且意思明确，但有冗余（如开头的 "Sorry"）。建议直接陈述并用连接词说明原因，补充具体替代方式（如何解决问题）以增强内容的具体性。

예시: No, I rarely argue with my friends because I'm not impulsive. When a problem arises, I prefer to discuss it calmly and look for a compromise or solution together.

× It it mainly depends on time.

✓ It mainly depends on the time.

原句有重复的词“it it”，属于句子结构/拼写错误。建议删除多余的“it”。此外，习惯用法是说“depends on the time”或更自然地说“depends on the situation”。

× For example, on weekdays we often chat about some updates about work and plans, but on the weekend we often chat over coffee or meals to share some family news.

✓ For example, on weekdays we often chat about updates on work and plans, but on the weekends we often chat over coffee or meals to share family news.

原句中介词和复数形式使用不够自然：应使用“updates on”而不是“updates about”，并且“weekend”在泛指时常用复数“weekends”。“some”在此处可删去以使句子更简洁。建议使用“updates on”和“on the weekends”。（简体中文）

× Most of the time I prefer to chat with a group of people because there is many stories and news about work updates, but when I'm with only one friend, we often chat about family members.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to chat with a group of people because there are many stories and news about work updates, but when I'm with only one friend, we often chat about family members.

主谓一致错误：后半句主语为复数（many stories），谓语应使用复数形式“are”而不是“is”。建议将“is”改为“are”。

× Definitely, I prefer to communicate with social media because I study far away from my family and friends so meeting face to face is difficult.

✓ Definitely, I prefer to communicate via social media because I study far away from my family and friends, so meeting face to face is difficult.

介词使用和句子衔接问题：应使用“via social media”或“through social media”表示“通过社交媒体”。句子中两个并列分句之间应加逗号连接。建议使用“via social media”和在连接词前加逗号。

× So friends and video calls help me to stay in close contact and I often use video calls to share news and see how are you.

✓ So friends and video calls help me stay in close contact, and I often use video calls to share news and see how you are.

疑问句语序误用：在陈述句中嵌入的从句“how you are”应使用陈述语序（主语在前，谓语在后），而不是疑问语序“how are you”。此外可去掉不必要的“to”使表达更自然。建议将“see how are you”改为“see how you are”。

× Sorry, I don't argue with my friends most of the time because I'm not the person who is impulsive.

✓ Sorry, I don't argue with my friends most of the time because I'm not an impulsive person.

原句中“the person who is impulsive”结构冗长且不自然，更地道的表达是“an impulsive person”。建议使用名词短语替代关系从句以使表达更简洁自然（简体中文）。

× When an issue comes, I always tend to find the way instead of arguing.

✓ When an issue comes up, I always try to find a way to resolve it instead of arguing.

短语搭配和不完整表达：英文常用“comes up”表示“出现”。“find the way”不完整，应为“find a way to resolve it”来明确要解决问题的意图。建议使用“comes up”和“find a way to resolve it”。