Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. ‘XY’).

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with friends because it lets us share news and support each other when problems arise. For example, when I have a difficulty at work, I often ask a close friend for advice, and their feedback helps me decide what to do next.

제안: Be more specific and use linking words correctly. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add concrete examples and reasons. Correct common errors: 'that day' -> 'that day', 'inspective' -> 'input' or 'advice'.

예시: I usually talk about my daily life and activities. For instance, I tell them what I did that day and ask for their advice when I need to make a decision, such as choosing a course or solving a personal problem.

제안: Provide a clear preference with one or two supporting reasons and use more natural phrasing. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' and replace awkward phrases like 'sharp decision' with 'better decision'.

예시: I prefer chatting in a group because I can get many different perspectives. For example, when I ask for advice about a career choice, group members offer varied ideas that help me make a better decision.

제안: Use a concise topic sentence and clear reasons. Correct repetition and awkward expressions. Explain specifically why face-to-face is better (e.g. body language, immediate feedback). Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to read body language and get immediate feedback. For example, when discussing a sensitive issue, seeing someone's facial expressions makes it easier to understand their feelings.

제안: Give a clear and complete response with correct vocabulary and grammar. Explain briefly how you handle arguments using linking words like 'but' and 'however'. Avoid trailing sentences and unclear phrases like 'respect the author to'.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue because we spend a lot of time together. However, we usually talk it through afterwards and try to resolve the problem calmly, respecting each other's opinions so our friendship stays strong.

× Yes I do because it's like to share and update I would like to each other and sometime when I have some problem I will ask them for XY. That's what I I always chatting with them.

✓ Yes, I do because I like to share updates with each other, and sometimes when I have a problem I will ask them for help. That's why I always chat with them.

Errors: incorrect verb forms and -ing usage ('it's like to share', 'always chatting'), awkward word order, missing preposition and article use. Suggestion: Use simple present 'I like' instead of 'it's like to', use 'share updates with each other' for correct preposition and plural agreement, use 'sometimes' and 'a problem', use 'ask them for help' for clarity, and use simple present 'always chat' for habitual action.

× I usually talk to them about my normal life, about the thing that I do in that day and moreover, I always ask them about how to make some decision that I need more inspective for my friend to make the better decision.

✓ I usually talk to them about my daily life, what I did that day, and I often ask them for advice when I need help making a decision.

Errors: tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing ('the thing that I do in that day'), incorrect word choice ('inspective'), and article use. Suggestion: Use 'daily life' and 'what I did that day' for clarity, use 'often ask them for advice' for idiomatic expression, and 'when I need help making a decision' is concise and grammatically correct.

× I prefer to chat with the group of many people because I think that mean I can get a lot of perspective from the others and that will provide me the new information and I can make the sharp decision from the advice.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of many people because I think that means I can get many perspectives from others; that will give me new information and help me make better decisions based on their advice.

Errors: subject-verb agreement ('that mean' -> 'that means'), incorrect pluralization ('a group of many people' is acceptable but 'many perspectives' is better), article misuse ('the new information'), and awkward adjective choice ('sharp decision'). Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree, use plural 'perspectives' and 'decisions', use 'new information' without 'the', and replace 'sharp decision' with 'better decisions'.

× I could say that I prefer face to face communication communication because I think it's easy to me to expand the thing and I to see the the person in in the same times in the same place is could make our clear when we talk.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because I find it easier to explain things and seeing the person in the same place at the same time makes our conversation clearer.

Errors: repetition ('communication communication', 'the the', 'in in'), incorrect word order and collocations ('easy to me to expand the thing', 'same times'), modal misuse ('is could'), and unclear meaning. Suggestion: Remove repetitions, use 'easier to explain things', 'seeing the person', and 'makes our conversation clearer' for natural phrasing.

× Yeah, sometime because we stay together for a really long time, so sometime we could argue with each other, but in the end, umm, we try to solve the problem that we face and we respect the author to and we found that it is.

✓ Yes, sometimes because we stay together for a long time, so sometimes we argue with each other, but in the end we try to solve the problems we face, we respect each other, and we find a solution.

Errors: adverb form ('sometime' -> 'sometimes'), modal/modal usage ('could argue' unnecessary), article and noun agreement ('the problem that we face'), incorrect phrase ('respect the author to'), and incomplete sentence ending. Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' for frequency, simple present 'we argue' for habitual actions, pluralize 'problems' if general, use 'respect each other', and finish with 'we find a solution' for completeness.