Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um) and vague phrases, and give one or two specific reasons or an example. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends every day because it helps us stay connected. However, sometimes it becomes boring when conversations are repetitive, for example when we only send short messages like "OK" or emojis.

제안: Answer directly and provide specific topics with brief details. Avoid repeating 'I don't know' and use linking words to list topics coherently.

예시: We usually talk about our shared memories and personal hobbies. For instance, we often reminisce about school trips and discuss current hobbies like playing football or reading novels.

제안: Give a clear preference and explain why with one supporting reason. Reduce hesitation and contradictory statements; use a linking word to add contrast if needed.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am shy and feel more comfortable in a one-on-one conversation. However, sometimes I join group chats when planning events or discussing common interests.

제안: State your preference clearly and give specific reasons with examples. Use clearer vocabulary (authentic, effective) instead of vague phrases like 'not true' or 'improved'.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more authentic and allows for better understanding through body language. For example, discussing sensitive topics is easier in person because you can see facial expressions and tone.

제안: Clarify your meaning and give a brief, specific example. Avoid contradictory or unclear statements; explain how often and why disagreements happen and how they are resolved.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, usually about small misunderstandings or disagreements over plans. For example, we once argued about where to go for dinner, but we resolved it by discussing each person's preference and compromising.

× Yes, I chat with my friends every day Uh, I like it uh, it is converted to uh write uh each other uh but uh, sometimes it is boring uh, I don't like.

✓ Yes, I chat with my friends every day. I like it, because we sometimes write to each other, but sometimes it can be boring and I don't enjoy it.

The original sentence has awkward tense and phrasing. 'It is converted to write each other' is incorrect; use 'we sometimes write to each other' to express reciprocal action. Add modal 'can be' to indicate that boredom is occasional. Break into shorter sentences and remove filler words to improve clarity.

× I don't know exactly, but with we umm often talk about, uh, memories and hobbies. I don't know exactly but.

✓ I don't know exactly, but we often talk about memories and hobbies.

'with we' is incorrect word order and use of preposition; use subject 'we' directly. Remove repeated fragments 'I don't know exactly but.' Keep present simple 'we often talk' for habitual action.

× No, I don't like uh, chat with a group of people be because I am shy uh, especially I chat with only one friend, umm, but I sometimes chat uh, a group. Umm, I think it is not true.

✓ No, I don't like chatting with a group of people because I am shy. I especially prefer chatting with only one friend, although sometimes I do chat in a group.

After 'like' use the -ing form 'chatting'. Remove extraneous 'be' and correct word order. Use 'prefer' + -ing or 'prefer to' and maintain consistent tense. 'I think it is not true' was unclear, so rephrased to clarify meaning.

× I think I prefer to communicate face to face, because online chat is not true, it is not improved. Our communicate face to face offline, commonly offline is true, we need to communicate.

✓ I think I prefer to communicate face to face, because online chat does not feel real and does not improve communication. Communicating face to face is more natural and necessary.

'Online chat is not true' is unnatural; use 'does not feel real'. 'It is not improved' is incorrect; express 'does not improve communication.' 'Our communicate' is incorrect; use gerund 'communicating' or noun phrase 'communication.' Simplify and correct prepositions and article usage.

× Yes, I sometimes argue my friends. But I don't like agreeing people. It's not true. Uh, whatever we, uh, talk to about other problems or so.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends. But I don't like to agree with people all the time. We talk about other problems sometimes.

Use 'argue with' (verb + preposition). 'Argue my friends' is incorrect. 'Agreeing people' should be 'agree with people.' 'Talk to about' is redundant; use 'talk about.' Rephrase to concise, grammatical sentences.