Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms and reduce hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep responses to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay updated about their lives. For example, we often talk about recent events or plans for the weekend, which helps us stay close.

제안: Be more specific and fluent: give a direct topic sentence, then provide concrete examples and use linking words (for example, such as). Avoid filler words and incomplete phrases.

예시: We talk about a range of topics. For example, we discuss school assignments, job opportunities, and weekend plans, and sometimes we share recommendations for books or movies.

제안: Clarify and expand briefly: give a clear preference and a reason using a linking word. One sentence for preference and one for reason will make the answer natural and complete.

예시: I prefer talking with one person because one-to-one conversations feel more personal and allow for deeper discussion.

제안: Avoid repetition and add a reason: state your preference clearly, then explain why using linking words such as because or because of. Limit to two sentences.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it is more convenient and lets me stay in touch quickly. For instance, I can send messages or photos any time without arranging a meeting.

제안: Make sentences grammatical and specific: answer directly, then give a clear example with a reason. Remove hesitations and correct word order and verb forms.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue about various topics, especially future careers. For example, I want a steady job while some friends prefer freelancing, so we debate the pros and cons of each option.

× I enjoying chat with my friends as I can ask them about their umm different news and what they did in the previous days and what what they are going to do next.

✓ I enjoy chatting with my friends because I can ask them about different news and what they did in the previous days and what they are going to do next.

The original uses 'I enjoying' which is incorrect. After a subject + main verb you need the base form: 'I enjoy'. When expressing 'chat' as an activity after a verb like enjoy, the gerund form 'chatting' is required. Also 'as' can be replaced by 'because' for clearer reason. Remove filler repetitions ('what what') and redundant words for clarity.

× Actually, there are different uh, topics I like to ask and chat about it with my friends.

✓ Actually, there are different topics I like to ask about and chat about with my friends.

The clause uses 'are' fine for existence, but 'ask and chat about it' has a pronoun 'it' that does not agree with plural 'topics' and creates redundancy. Use 'ask about and chat about' or simply 'talk about' to match plural and maintain present tense consistency.

× For instance, uh, sometimes we are talking about the school, the jobs and what.

✓ For instance, sometimes we talk about school, jobs, and other things.

The continuous 'we are talking' suggests an action happening now; for habitual actions use simple present 'we talk'. Also 'the school, the jobs' is unnatural; remove definite articles and make plural 'jobs'. Replace vague 'and what' with 'and other things'.

× I prefer to chat and take a conversation with one person.

✓ I prefer to chat and have a conversation with one person.

'Take a conversation' is unidiomatic in English. The correct collocation is 'have a conversation'. Keeping 'prefer to' with verbs is fine; use 'have a conversation' to fix sentence structure.

× For me, it's better to communicate via social media like WhatsApp, Instagram and other platforms like Facebook and Twitter. That's better for me.

✓ For me, it's better to communicate via social media like WhatsApp, Instagram, Facebook, and Twitter.

Sentence repeats 'That's better for me' unnecessarily. Keep a single clear statement in present tense. Also combine list items without repeating 'like' and ensure comma separation.

× MMM uh, there are many topics we are argue which I with each other, but the most topic we are have different opinion about the future jobs.

✓ There are many topics we argue about with each other, but the main topic we have different opinions about is future jobs.

Multiple errors: 'we are argue' mixes continuous form incorrectly; use 'we argue' or 'we argue about'. 'which I with each other' is ungrammatical—replace with 'about with each other'. 'the most topic' should be 'the main topic' or 'the topic we most often disagree about'. 'we are have' is wrong; use 'we have'. Use plural 'opinions' to match 'we'. Rearranged sentence for clarity and correct tense.