Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və təbii olmayan ifadələr var. Cümlələrinizi daha sadə və düzgün qurmağa çalışın. Məsələn, 'every a child should be do those rules' ifadəsi səhvdir, düzgün forması 'every child should follow these rules' olmalıdır. Həmçinin, 'very uniform' ifadəsi mənasızdır, 'wearing a uniform' daha düzgündür. Cümlələrinizi 3-4 cümlə ilə məhdudlaşdırın və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, all students must wear a uniform, so no one can wear other clothes. Also, wearing jewelry is forbidden to keep the school environment safe and focused.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və ifadə tərzi təbii deyil. 'It's so necessary to do rules' ifadəsi səhvdir, düzgün forması 'It is necessary to have rules' olmalıdır. Həmçinin, fikrinizi daha aydın və əlaqəli ifadə etmək üçün əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, 'because it makes every child's living conditions the same' ifadəsini daha aydınlaşdırın.

예시: Definitely yes, I think having more rules is important because it ensures that all students have the same living conditions. This helps create a fair and safe environment for everyone.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və təbii olmayan ifadələr var. Məsələn, 'in this like job' ifadəsi səhvdir, düzgün forması 'in this kind of job' olmalıdır. Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, 'because she explains and does her work very well' yerinə 'because she explains concepts clearly and is very dedicated' deyə bilərsiniz.

예시: In my opinion, all teachers do their jobs well, but my math teacher is the best. She explains concepts clearly and is very dedicated to helping students understand the material.

× Yes, in my school there are several rules that every a child should be do those rules.

✓ Yes, in my school there are several rules that every child should follow.

The phrase 'every a child' is incorrect because 'every' is a determiner that should be followed directly by a singular noun without 'a'. Also, 'should be do those rules' is grammatically incorrect; the correct form is 'should follow those rules' or simply 'should follow'. The suggestion improves quantifier usage and verb form.

× One of them is very uniform.

✓ One of them is the uniform rule.

The sentence 'One of them is very uniform' is unclear and incorrectly uses 'uniform' as an adjective without context. It likely intends to refer to the rule about uniforms. Clarifying the sentence to 'One of them is the uniform rule' makes the meaning clear and grammatically correct.

× It's so important no one can wear other things to school.

✓ It's so important that no one can wear other things to school.

The original sentence lacks the conjunction 'that' to connect the clauses properly. Adding 'that' improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Second one is not wearing jewelries because it's forbidden.

✓ The second rule is not wearing jewelry because it's forbidden.

'Jewelries' is incorrect because 'jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, the sentence needs a subject ('The second rule') for clarity.

× Definitely yes. It's so necessary to do rules in schools because it make every child's living conditions same, that's why it's important.

✓ Definitely yes. It's necessary to follow rules in schools because it makes every child's living conditions the same; that's why it's important.

The phrase 'to do rules' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'to follow rules'. Also, 'it make' should be 'it makes' to agree with the singular subject. Adding 'the' before 'same' is necessary for correct adjective usage.

× In my opinion every teacher in my school does their job very well but one of them is my maths teacher who is the best in this like job because she explains and does her work very well.

✓ In my opinion, every teacher in my school does his or her job very well, but one of them is my math teacher who is the best at this kind of job because she explains and does her work very well.

The pronoun 'their' is plural and does not agree with the singular subject 'every teacher'. It should be 'his or her'. Also, 'maths' is commonly 'math' in American English, and 'in this like job' is awkward; 'at this kind of job' is clearer. Commas improve sentence clarity.