Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Make sure your answer is clear and concise, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'to ensure that students', you can say 'These rules help students focus on their studies by promoting discipline and punctuality.'

예시: Yes, definitely. My school has several rules for students. For instance, students must wear uniforms to maintain equality and discipline. Moreover, there are strict rules about attendance and punctuality. These rules help students focus on their studies by promoting discipline and responsibility.

제안: Avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence variety. Use linking words like 'because', 'therefore', or 'in addition' to make your answer more coherent. Also, pay attention to subject-verb agreement, for example, 'rules create' instead of 'rules creates'.

예시: Sure, I believe that students could benefit from more rules because they create discipline and structure. Therefore, students can focus more on their studies. In addition, clear guidelines prevent misunderstandings and ensure fairness among all students.

제안: Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct minor grammar mistakes. For example, say 'difficult concepts' instead of 'hard thing'. Also, expand your answer slightly by adding a reason or example to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, my math teacher is really good at teaching. She explains difficult concepts in a simple way so everyone can understand. I truly admire her teaching skills because she is patient and always willing to help students who struggle.

× So to to ensure that students to ensure that students take care of their studies.

✓ So to ensure that students take care of their studies.

The sentence contains repetition and redundancy ('to to ensure that students to ensure that students'), which is a sentence structure error. Removing the repeated phrase makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× I believe that students could benefit from more rules because rules creates discipline.

✓ I believe that students could benefit from more rules because rules create discipline.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'create' instead of 'creates' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× Rules creates discipline and structure.

✓ Rules create discipline and structure.

Again, 'rules' is plural, so the verb must be 'create' to match the plural subject. Using 'creates' is incorrect subject-verb agreement.

× She explains hard thing in a simple way so everyone can understand.

✓ She explains hard things in a simple way so everyone can understand.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple difficult concepts. This is an incorrect use of singular noun where plural is needed.