Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors, making it difficult to understand. 建議你用簡單明瞭的句子直接回答問題，並且避免使用不正確的詞彙。你可以先說明學校的規定，然後用連接詞補充細節。

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, we have to wear a uniform and keep our shoes clean. Also, students must tie their hair neatly if it is long.

제안: 你的回答不夠清楚且語法錯誤較多，建議你先直接回答問題，然後用簡單的連接詞來說明原因，並提供具體的例子。

예시: Yes, I think more rules can help students. For example, clear rules can guide us to behave properly and focus on our studies.

제안: 你的回答基本上能表達意思，但句子結構和用詞需要改進。建議你用更完整的句子，並用連接詞使回答更流暢。

예시: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. I admire her a lot because she teaches me clearly. Therefore, I always greet her politely when I see her.

× Yes, be a student.

✓ Yes, as a student,

The phrase 'be a student' is incorrect here because it lacks a proper verb form to fit the sentence context. Using 'as a student' correctly introduces the role or perspective. In English, we often use 'as a' to indicate role or capacity.

× cash your shoes and more cashless clothes.

✓ polish your shoes and wear more casual clothes.

The word 'cash' is incorrectly used here; it seems the student meant 'polish'. Also, 'cashless clothes' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'casual' to describe informal clothing. Using the correct adjectives and verbs improves clarity.

× Yes I do bake small more loose can teach student the correct thing.

✓ Yes, I think having more flexible rules can teach students the correct things.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Bake small more loose' is nonsensical. The corrected sentence uses proper sentence structure and vocabulary to express the intended meaning clearly.

× So the student have have correct direction to do something like uh we can have the direction to.

✓ So the students have the correct direction to do something, like we can have guidance.

The subject 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural verb 'have'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and repetitive; the correction clarifies the meaning and fixes subject-verb agreement.

× I have a teacher teach me well and I very admire her.

✓ I have a teacher who teaches me well and I admire her very much.

The relative clause needs 'who' to connect the teacher and the verb. 'Teach' should be 'teaches' for third person singular. 'I very admire her' is incorrect; 'I admire her very much' is the correct adverb placement.

× So every time when I see her I I will say I will say hi to her.

✓ So every time I see her, I will say hi to her.

The sentence has repeated words and awkward phrasing. Removing duplicates and placing the adverbial phrase correctly improves fluency and clarity.