Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences simpler and more direct. For example, clearly state that there are rules and explain the role of the captain in monitoring students' behavior. Avoid using confusing words like 'ambitious' incorrectly.

예시: Yes, there are specific rules for students at my school. For example, we have a class captain who helps monitor students' behavior both inside and outside the classroom.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I think students would benefit from having more rules because rules help maintain discipline. For instance, during my high school days, the class captain ensured that students behaved well both inside and outside the classroom.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to make your sentences smoother and more natural by combining ideas and using correct grammar.

예시: Yes, I have a teacher named Sarah who teaches us English. She does her job very well by explaining the lessons clearly and helping us with our homework.

× Yes, there is given a specific rules in school for students as there is a captain who can look over the ambitious and their activities they do inside of their classroom as well as in the school also.

✓ Yes, there are specific rules given in school for students as there is a captain who can look over the ambitions and their activities they do inside their classroom as well as in the school.

The phrase 'there is given a specific rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'ambitious' should be 'ambitions' to correctly refer to plural noun. The phrase 'inside of their classroom' is better as 'inside their classroom' for natural usage.

× In my opinion, yes. Yes, I believe myself that I have been through high school days and there were a captain who is who used to teach as a rule to be inside of classroom as well going to outside of classroom also. So there is.

✓ In my opinion, yes. Yes, I believe that I have been through high school days and there was a captain who used to enforce the rule to be inside the classroom as well as going outside the classroom. So there was.

The phrase 'there were a captain' is incorrect because 'captain' is singular, so the verb should be 'was' instead of 'were'. Also, 'inside of classroom' should be 'inside the classroom' and 'going to outside of classroom' should be 'going outside the classroom' for correct preposition and article usage.

× Yes, I have a teacher. Her name is. Sarah is she teaches us English as she has been doing with her subject and she's helping us with doing homework also.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher. Her name is Sarah. She teaches us English and has been doing so with her subject, and she helps us with our homework also.

The sentence 'Sarah is she teaches us English' is incorrect due to improper sentence structure and missing punctuation. It should be split into two sentences: 'Her name is Sarah.' and 'She teaches us English.' Also, 'she has been doing with her subject' is awkward; better to say 'has been doing so with her subject'. 'She's helping us with doing homework' should be 'she helps us with our homework' for correct verb form and article usage.