Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are there any rules for students at your school?
수험생
Yes, there are a lot of rules. In my school, there are rules for boys and girls. For boys, they only need to cut their hair short. However, for girls there are a lot of limitations such as not coloring their hair, their nails, not wearing makeup and wearing high heel shoe. Those are the rules of our school.
시험관
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
수험생
Despite the heavy regulations and limitations of our school, I believe that students would still benefit from these rules as this could keep them disciplined and more presentable because the school is just doing this for the students and not only to benefit the school itself.
시험관
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
수험생
Yes, I do have a teacher who does her job very well. Her name is Miss Eichel. She is my English Literature teacher. I can say that she really does her job well because not only she teaches us very well but also has a great connection to all of her students, making her students feel comfortable whenever her class.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by combining related ideas and avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.
예시: Yes, my school has several rules for both boys and girls. For instance, boys must keep their hair short, while girls are not allowed to color their hair, wear makeup, or high heels. These rules aim to maintain discipline and uniformity.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer addresses the question well and provides reasons, but the sentence structure is a bit complex and could be clearer. Try to use simpler sentences and linking words to make your ideas easier to follow.
예시: Although our school has strict rules, I think students benefit from them because they help us stay disciplined and look presentable. Moreover, these rules are meant to help students, not just the school.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
점수: 85.0제안: Your answer is detailed and shows your opinion clearly. However, to improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating phrases like 'does her job well'. Also, watch for small grammar points such as article use and sentence flow.
예시: Yes, I have a teacher named Miss Eichel who teaches English Literature. She is excellent because she not only teaches effectively but also connects well with students, making the class comfortable and engaging.
문법
× For boys, they only need to cut their hair short.
✓ For boys, they only need to cut their hair short.
No correction needed here as 'hair' is uncountable and correctly used in singular form.
× However, for girls there are a lot of limitations such as not coloring their hair, their nails, not wearing makeup and wearing high heel shoe.
✓ However, for girls there are a lot of limitations such as not coloring their hair or their nails, not wearing makeup, and wearing high heel shoes.
The phrase 'wearing high heel shoe' is incorrect because 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to match the context. Also, 'such as not coloring their hair, their nails' is better connected with 'or' to clarify the items. This correction addresses pluralization and clarity.
× making her students feel comfortable whenever her class.
✓ making her students feel comfortable whenever they are in her class.
The phrase 'whenever her class' is incomplete and incorrect. It needs a preposition and subject to clarify the meaning. Adding 'they are in' before 'her class' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.
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