Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时句子结构较为混乱，表达不够清晰，建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，并且注意语法和时态的正确使用。

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms every day. Regarding hairstyles, there are only two allowed styles: long hair must be tied in a ponytail, and short hair is also acceptable.

제안: 回答内容表达不清，句子不完整且有语法错误，建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用具体理由支持观点。

예시: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. This is because school should focus on learning, not on students competing over appearances or possessions like toys and hairstyles.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，清晰描述老师的特点和教学效果，并保持句子连贯。

예시: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He makes his lessons interesting and easy to understand, even when the topics are complicated. After his classes, I feel that I have learned a lot more than before.

× The only mission students should do at school is to study not to wearing beautiful necessary tears or comparing who looks better, who get more cute toys, who has more great hairstyle.

✓ The only mission students should do at school is to study, not to wear beautiful necessary tears or compare who looks better, who gets more cute toys, who has a better hairstyle.

这里的动词形式错误，'to wearing' 应改为不定式 'to wear'，'comparing' 应改为动词原形 'compare'，因为前面用了 'not to'，后面动词应保持一致。

× who get more cute toys

✓ who gets more cute toys

主语 'who' 指代单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'gets'。

× who has more great hairstyle

✓ who has a better hairstyle

'hairstyle' 是可数名词，前面应加冠词 'a'，且 'more great' 用法不当，应改为 'better' 表示比较级。

× we should make our hair only two hairstyles uploaded.

✓ we should have only two hairstyles for our hair.

'make our hair only two hairstyles uploaded' 结构不正确，'make' 后不应接 'uploaded'，应改为 'have' 表示拥有两种发型。

× 1 is for the long hair and one but we had to make a ponytail and or we could do a short hair like mine.

✓ One is for long hair, and we have to make a ponytail; or we could have short hair like mine.

句子连接词使用混乱，'and one but' 不合适，应分句并用正确连接词 'and' 和 'or'。

× I'll probably talk about or had it.

✓ I'll probably talk about Mr. Hadit.

'or had it' 可能是人名错误拼写，应改为正确人名，且句子缺少宾语。

× It really makes his clothes very amusing and we all very like to listen to his lessons from some complicated thing.

✓ He really makes his classes very interesting, and we all like to listen to his lessons even when they are complicated.

'makes his clothes very amusing' 应为 'makes his classes very interesting'，'we all very like' 语序错误，应为 'we all like'。

× And his mouth will be much more easier to understand after his class.

✓ And his speech will be much easier to understand after his class.

'his mouth' 用法不当，应改为 'his speech'，'more easier' 是双重比较，应改为 'easier'。

× We are we are ongoing much more knowledge than before.

✓ We are gaining much more knowledge than before.

句子结构混乱，'We are we are ongoing' 不正确，应改为 'We are gaining' 表示正在获得知识。