Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words like 'uh' and 'some' which reduce fluency. Try to give a direct and concise response with clear examples. Avoid redundancy and unnecessary hesitation. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, my school has several rules. For example, we must wear a uniform and follow guidelines about behavior in class and around the school. These rules help maintain discipline and a good learning environment.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'seem like me make' and 'more rules does not always equals'. Focus on correct sentence structure and clearer expression. Also, provide linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I think having too many rules can make students feel restricted and less motivated. Therefore, more rules do not necessarily create a better school environment or improve students' experiences.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. There are grammatical mistakes such as subject-verb agreement and run-on sentences. Try to complete your thoughts clearly, use linking words, and provide specific examples about the teacher's impact.

예시: I believe all my teachers have done their jobs well, but my grade 10 science teacher stands out. She explained difficult concepts clearly and encouraged me to work hard, which greatly influenced my interest in science.

× So yes, my school does have few rules.

✓ So yes, my school does have a few rules.

The phrase 'few rules' without an article implies almost none, which is likely not intended. Using 'a few rules' correctly indicates some rules exist. This is a common singular/plural quantifier issue.

× Most of them include the uh, rules about how we should dress, as well as about the do's and don'ts on the school.

✓ Most of them include the rules about how we should dress, as well as the do's and don'ts at school.

The preposition 'on the school' is incorrect here; 'at school' is the correct phrase to indicate rules applying within the school environment.

× Having more rules may seem like me make the student feel like they are being restricted from trying new opportunities.

✓ Having more rules may seem to make the students feel like they are being restricted from trying new opportunities.

The phrase 'may seem like me make' is incorrect. The correct modal verb structure is 'may seem to make'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the general statement.

× So more rules does not always equals to having a better environment as well as better school days for the students.

✓ So more rules do not always equal having a better environment as well as better school days for the students.

'More rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'do not' instead of 'does not'. Also, 'equals to' is incorrect; it should be 'equal' without 'to'.

× Teachers behavior or teaching styles plays a critical role on students but I do believe that every teacher who has taught me has done their job pretty well.

✓ Teachers' behavior or teaching styles play a critical role for students, but I do believe that every teacher who has taught me has done their job pretty well.

'Teachers behavior' needs a possessive apostrophe to become 'Teachers' behavior'. Also, 'plays' should be 'play' to agree with the compound subject 'behavior or teaching styles'. The preposition 'on' should be 'for'.

× But if I do have to mention someone it would be my grade 10 science teacher she played a huge role in my life and also.

✓ But if I have to mention someone, it would be my grade 10 science teacher; she played a huge role in my life as well.

The original sentence is a run-on and incomplete. Adding a comma after 'someone' and separating the two clauses with a semicolon or period improves clarity. 'And also' is incomplete and should be replaced with 'as well'.