Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“we can shout or speak when we're in our class”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的表达，并避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, at my Chinese Senior High School, there are many rules. For example, we are not allowed to eat in the classroom, and we must keep quiet during lessons.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“there are some rules are unnecessary”应简化为“some rules are unnecessary”。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并提供更具体的理由。

예시: Maybe more rules could help, but I believe some existing rules are unnecessary. For instance, not allowing eating in the classroom seems too strict and doesn't cause much problem.

제안: 回答简短且缺少细节，且“cares us a lot”语法错误，应为“cares about us”。建议增加具体例子，丰富内容。

예시: Yes, I really admire my Chinese teacher. She is very responsible and gentle. For example, she always helps students who have difficulties and encourages us to do our best.

× we can shout or speak when we're in our class

✓ we can't shout or speak when we're in our class

句子中表达的是禁止行为，应该使用否定形式“can't”，而不是“can”。这里的错误属于情态动词用法错误。

× there are some rules are unnecessary

✓ there are some rules that are unnecessary

句子中缺少连接词“that”来引导定语从句，导致句子结构不完整。需要加上“that”使句子完整通顺。

× She always cares us a lot

✓ She always cares for us a lot

动词care后面需要加介词for来表示关心某人，直接加宾语“us”是不正确的用法。