Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are there any rules for students at your school?
수험생
Well, at my high school, there are indeed many rules that students must follow. Firstly, wearing a uniform every day is compulsory for every student to maintain a sense of discipline and unity. In addition, students are not allowed to dye their hair.
시험관
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
수험생
To be honest, I think yes, students would benefit more from a lot of rules. For example, we are asked not to use smartphone during the class. I think it really influenced me and have positive impact that I can focus on study.
시험관
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
수험생
Yes, it was my Chinese teacher in my junior high school. Actually, she was really famous for teaching Chinese well in Kaohsiung. She not only teach very well but also she cares about.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
점수: 75.0제안: 你的回答结构较好，直接回应了问题并给出了具体规则，但语言表达稍显简单，且缺少连接词使内容衔接不够流畅。建议使用更多连接词如“also”、“for example”等，使回答更自然连贯，同时丰富词汇表达。
예시: Yes, there are several rules at my high school. For example, students must wear uniforms every day to promote discipline and unity. Also, dyeing hair is prohibited to maintain a professional appearance.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，如“have positive impact”应为“has a positive impact”。建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用更准确的表达，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。
예시: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. For instance, we are not allowed to use smartphones during class, which has had a positive impact by helping me concentrate better on my studies.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如“she not only teach”应为“she not only teaches”，且“she cares about”后缺少宾语。建议完整表达观点，注意语法，使用连接词使句子完整且连贯。
예시: Yes, my Chinese teacher in junior high school was excellent. She was well-known in Kaohsiung for her teaching skills. Not only did she teach very well, but she also cared deeply about her students' progress.
문법
× I think it really influenced me and have positive impact that I can focus on study.
✓ I think it really influences me and has a positive impact so that I can focus on studying.
这里的时态和主谓一致有误。'influenced'是过去式，句子需要现在时态；'have'应改为第三人称单数形式'have'→'has'；'focus on study'应改为'focus on studying'，动词后接动名词形式。
× She not only teach very well but also she cares about.
✓ She not only teaches very well but also cares about us.
动词'teach'应使用第三人称单数形式'teaches'，且句子不完整，'cares about'后应有宾语，补充'us'使句子完整。
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