Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly state the rules and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must enter the classroom on time and be respectful to teachers and classmates.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I believe more rules would help because without them, the school environment could become chaotic. Since students come from different backgrounds, rules help everyone focus and behave appropriately.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains incorrect words and grammar. Make sure to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence and add specific details with linking words.

예시: Yes, I have an English teacher whom I really admire. She is very dedicated and always explains the reasons behind the lessons clearly, which helps me understand better.

× In my school there are so many rules for a student need to abide by such as we need to entrance the class on time and when.

✓ In my school, there are so many rules that a student needs to abide by, such as entering the class on time.

The original sentence has a sentence structure error due to missing conjunctions and incorrect verb forms. 'For a student need to abide by' should be 'that a student needs to abide by' to correctly link the clause. Also, 'we need to entrance the class' is incorrect; the verb 'entrance' is a noun here, and the correct verb is 'entering'. The phrase 'and when' is incomplete and unclear, so it is omitted for clarity.

× I think yes because if the school doesn't have any rules so the area gonna be chaotic because there are people was grow different and their parents kiss them different so if they are gathering together they need to concentrate.

✓ I think yes because if the school doesn't have any rules, the area will be chaotic since people grow up differently and their parents raise them differently, so when they gather together, they need to concentrate.

The sentence has multiple issues including incorrect modal verb usage and verb forms. 'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'will'. 'People was grow different' is incorrect; it should be 'people grow up differently'. 'Parents kiss them different' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'parents raise them differently'. Also, 'so if they are gathering together they need to concentrate' is better expressed as 'so when they gather together, they need to concentrate' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I have one T-shirt that I really adore her.

✓ Yes, I have one teacher that I really adore.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'T-shirt' instead of 'teacher', which is likely a speech recognition error. Also, 'that I really adore her' is redundant; 'that I really adore' is sufficient without the pronoun 'her'. The corrected sentence removes the pronoun to avoid redundancy.

× She is an English teacher, she always intend to teach student in the class and whenever she teach she always explain the details about why this gonna be like.

✓ She is an English teacher; she always intends to teach students in the class, and whenever she teaches, she always explains the details about why this is going to be like that.

The verbs 'intend', 'teach', and 'explain' need to agree with the third person singular subject 'she', so they should be 'intends', 'teaches', and 'explains'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to'. The phrase 'why this gonna be like' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'why this is going to be like that' for clarity.