Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is informal and contains inappropriate language, which is not suitable for the IELTS speaking test. Try to answer politely and directly, and provide a clear explanation with specific details. Also, avoid using offensive words.

예시: No, there are very few rules at my school because the administration prefers to give students more freedom to learn independently.

제안: Your answer is too brief and lacks supporting details. Try to give a clear opinion and explain your reasons with examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I don't think more rules would help because many teenagers tend to ignore strict regulations; instead, encouraging responsibility might be more effective.

제안: Your answer is unclear and confusing. Make sure to answer the question directly and provide specific reasons or examples. Avoid ambiguous expressions and irrelevant information.

예시: Yes, I have a teacher who does a great job. For example, my English teacher explains lessons clearly and always encourages students to participate actively.

× No, because my school did not give a **** about their students.

✓ No, because my school did not give a **** about its students.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect here because 'school' is a singular noun and requires a singular possessive pronoun 'its' to maintain subject-pronoun agreement.

× No, I guess because when I play some music, they're playing, which means that they are addicted to my words and students do not care about them.

✓ No, I guess because when I play some music, they are playing, which means that they are addicted to my words and the students do not care about them.

The contraction 'they're' should be expanded to 'they are' for clarity. Also, 'students' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify the group being referred to. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.