Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally relevant but could be improved by correcting grammar errors and making the sentences more natural and concise. For example, use 'must wear' instead of 'has to be wear' and avoid redundancy. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly using linking words.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must not use phones during class because it distracts them. Additionally, wearing a uniform is mandatory, which helps prevent discrimination among students.

제안: Your answer needs improvement in grammar and vocabulary. Use correct forms like 'disciplined' instead of 'discipline' and avoid repeating similar words like 'benefit' and 'beneficial'. Also, try to provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details with linking words.

예시: I believe that having more rules can benefit students. This is because rules help them become more disciplined and organized, which are important qualities for their future success.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Avoid incomplete sentences and use proper linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I have several teachers who perform their duties very well. They are disciplined and organized, treat all students fairly, and are also very friendly, which makes learning enjoyable.

× Moreover, uniform has to be wear by students.

✓ Moreover, uniform has to be worn by students.

The verb 'wear' should be in the past participle form 'worn' after 'has to be' to form the correct passive voice construction.

× From my perspective, students should follow more rules and it will definitely benefit them as following rules make them more discipline organized and it would be very benefit beneficial for them.

✓ From my perspective, students should follow more rules and it will definitely benefit them as following rules make them more disciplined and organized and it would be very beneficial for them.

The adjective 'discipline' is incorrect here; it should be the past participle adjective 'disciplined'. Also, 'benefit' should be 'beneficial' to correctly function as an adjective describing the effect on students.

× For sure, there are a lot of teachers that I know and which they done have done their job in very disciplined and organized manner without any discrimination.

✓ For sure, there are a lot of teachers that I know and who have done their job in a very disciplined and organized manner without any discrimination.

The phrase 'done have done' is incorrect; the correct form is 'have done'. Also, 'which they' is incorrect when referring to people; 'who' should be used instead. Additionally, 'a' is needed before 'very disciplined' to correctly modify 'manner'.

× They are my school teachers I would say that are very friendly as well and.

✓ They are my school teachers, I would say, who are very friendly as well.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper punctuation. Adding commas and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning and completes the thought.