Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are there any rules for students at your school?
수험생
Yeah, there were many rules when I was in school. Like, uh, we should, uh, like whenever a bell rings or whenever the class is over, we should not leave our class until the next teacher comes. And like that there were many rules in our schools to maintain the decorum of the school.
시험관
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
수험생
Yes, obviously I, uh, if the rules will be there, uh, and if the students properly follow all the rules, then uh, uh, they will be more trained and disciplined in their life.
시험관
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
수험생
Yes, when I was in school, like now I'm not in a school. So when I was there at my, my time, there were many teachers who were doing their job very good and like very good at their job. So that's.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
점수: 65.0제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'like' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
예시: Yes, my school had several rules to maintain order. For example, students were required to stay in their classrooms until the next teacher arrived after the bell rang. Additionally, these rules helped keep the school's decorum intact.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
점수: 60.0제안: Avoid excessive hesitation and filler words to improve fluency. Provide a clear opinion with supporting reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent and effective.
예시: Yes, I believe that having more rules can benefit students because following rules helps them develop discipline and good habits, which are important for their future life.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
점수: 55.0제안: Make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence and provide specific examples or reasons to support your answer. Also, avoid filler words to sound more confident.
예시: Yes, during my school years, I had several teachers who performed their jobs excellently. For instance, my math teacher was very patient and explained concepts clearly, which helped me understand the subject better.
문법
× there were many teachers who were doing their job very good and like very good at their job
✓ there were many teachers who were doing their job very well and were very good at their job
The word 'good' is an adjective, but here it should be an adverb modifying the verb 'doing'. Therefore, 'good' should be changed to 'well' to correctly describe how the teachers were doing their job.
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