Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的なルールを明確に述べ、文法と語彙を正しく使う練習をしましょう。例えば、"must not be late for lessons"や"students have to clean their classrooms"のように具体的に表現してください。

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must not be late for lessons, and they are required to clean their classrooms after classes. These rules help maintain order and cleanliness.

제안: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現が目立ちます。理由を述べる際は、明確で具体的な内容を使い、接続詞を活用して論理的に話しましょう。例えば、"because rules teach students discipline and prepare them for society"のように表現してください。

예시: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because rules teach discipline and help prepare them to live responsibly in society.

제안: 文法の誤りが多く、情報の伝え方が不明瞭です。教師の特徴を述べる際は、正しい時制と語彙を使い、具体的な説明を加えましょう。例えば、"He was a good Japanese teacher who also taught exam strategies"のように表現してください。

예시: Yes, I had a great teacher in high school named Mr. Ogawa. He was an excellent Japanese teacher and also taught us effective strategies to succeed in exams.

× Yes, there are some rules in him.

✓ Yes, there are some rules in it.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrectly used to refer to 'school', which is an inanimate object. The correct pronoun is 'it'. This error is due to incorrect pronoun reference. Use 'it' for objects or things.

× At my home school, for example, students must not be great for her lesson and they have to have Queen here.

✓ At my home school, for example, students must not be late for their lessons and they have to have a uniform here.

The pronouns 'her' and 'Queen' are incorrectly used. 'Her' should be 'their' to agree with the plural subject 'students'. 'Great' is a wrong word here; the intended word is 'late'. 'Queen' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'uniform'. Correct pronoun agreement and word choice are necessary.

× Yes, I think students would have benefit from more rules and this is because students have come around and rules him to live in society.

✓ Yes, I think students would benefit from more rules because students have to follow rules to live in society.

The phrase 'would have benefit' is incorrect; it should be 'would benefit'. The phrase 'rules him' is incorrect; 'him' is the wrong pronoun and 'rules' is misused. The correct phrase is 'have to follow rules'. This corrects verb usage and pronoun errors.

× Yes, I had a good teacher at high school and his name is Mr. Ogawa who is a good teaching Japanese but he also teach taught strategy to succeed in exam.

✓ Yes, I had a good teacher at high school and his name was Mr. Ogawa who was good at teaching Japanese but he also taught strategies to succeed in exams.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the teacher is in the past, 'is' should be 'was', 'teach' should be 'taught'. Also, 'teaching Japanese' needs 'at' to indicate the subject, and 'strategy' should be plural 'strategies'. 'Exam' should be plural 'exams' for general meaning.