Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In your answer, try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to sound more natural and confident. Also, correct the phrase 'miniature rolls' to 'a set of rules' and use singular/plural forms correctly, e.g., 'this is a really good rule' or 'these are really good rules'. Try to provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific details without redundancy.

예시: Yes, we have a set of rules at my school. For example, students are expected to respect their teachers, which helps maintain a positive learning environment.

제안: Avoid repeating words like 'but but' and ensure subject-verb agreement, e.g., 'some rules are sometimes not really fair'. Use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' properly to connect ideas. Try to give a clear opinion with supporting reasons to make your answer more effective and coherent.

예시: I think it depends on the rules. Some rules can be unfair to certain students; however, others are very beneficial because they promote discipline and fairness.

제안: Your answer is quite good with clear structure and supporting details. To improve, avoid small mistakes like 'know, knowledgeable' and try to use more varied vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words like 'in addition' or 'furthermore' to enhance coherence.

예시: Yes, I had a teacher who was very knowledgeable and always explained difficult topics clearly, which helped me understand better. In addition, she was patient and supportive, making learning enjoyable.

× Actually, uh, yes, uh, we have a miniature rolls, umm, as far as I remember, umm, the, uh, students should respect teachers and this is a really, uh, good rules.

✓ Actually, uh, yes, uh, we have miniature rules, umm, as far as I remember, umm, the, uh, students should respect teachers and these are really, uh, good rules.

The word 'rolls' is incorrect here; the correct plural form is 'rules'. Also, 'this is a really good rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural, so it should be 'these are really good rules'. This is a singular and plural issue that affects subject-verb agreement and demonstrative pronouns.

× I think it depends on the rules. Some rules is sometimes it's not really fair to some students and but but on the other hand, some rules are really beneficial.

✓ I think it depends on the rules. Some rules are sometimes not really fair to some students, but on the other hand, some rules are really beneficial.

The phrase 'Some rules is' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are'. Also, the sentence had redundant conjunctions and awkward phrasing which were corrected for clarity. This is a singular and plural issue affecting subject-verb agreement.